| Breathe by fileg | 3 Review(s) |
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| Fimbrethil | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/25/2026 |
| Wow I am forgetful :) I was also going to mention (and this is good) the first part really sounded like you were talking about Shakespeare's Henry V. "A touch of Harry in the night" and so on. Instead of sleeping he would walk among his men, etc. |
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| Fimbrethil | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/25/2026 |
I just saw the end of this chapter again and realized he is using the reeds to support himself when before he had used Boromir. Well done getting the comparison in there.
--Fimbrethil |
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| Fimbrethil | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 5/25/2026 |
| Sigh...was he speaking to himself or Boromir? I don't remember the last time I read this scene happening in the present. It was nice. One thing though. Boromir obviously is the Blade of Gondor, but is that here the first thing Faramir will think of him as? |
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