News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
| About Us News Resources
Login
Become a member
Help
Search
|
|
|
| He Loses Us Both by lilpippin | 4 Review(s) |
|---|---|
| lucidity | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/6/2005 |
| I've wondered if the twins could get sick, the poor dears. This is so sad, but beautifully written. Author Reply: Thank you! I am glad that you liked it and reviewed. | |
| Falasiel | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 2/3/2005 |
| Heaven knows I read way too much fanfic involving the Peredhil, but I've never seen one that takes a look at the extent to which their Edain heritage might affect their health. (In fact, no one seems to pay much attention to how their Mortal blood would affect their thoughts, instinct, reactions and so on. How 'bout taking all that up in your next piece? Author Reply: I'm glad that you have enjoyed this so much! I have been pondering a few things about the human blood within my favorite half-elf family, and I have drawn some conclusions about a new story based on some of those qualities. It is not written yet but I have a plot down. Thanks for reviewing! | |
| MaidenofValinor | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/29/2004 |
| Wow! Being a twin myself, that was very touching. I love the last line! Author Reply: I'm glad you liked it! Took me only like 2 milliseconds to create that line. Thanks for reviewing! | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: Prologue on 10/28/2004 |
| That was very powerful - Elladan's anger was scary! Poor Elrohir, I hope he'll be all right - Elladan is right, he too would die if Elrohir did. Please write more! Jay Author Reply: This is coming from Jay of Lasgalen..... the Jay of Lasgalen? Yeah, I am a fan or as people say, a lurker. (lol) Anyway, yea Elladan's anger was scary. I was afraid myself. When I was writing it, it started off as a one-shot, but I was persuaded to write more. That is the reason why the chapter sounded a little bit like a conclusion....I also have never been one for cliff-hangers. So that is chapter 1. Chapter 2 coming soon. Anyway, thanks for reviewing, I relaly appreciate it... a lot more than you know! | |