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| He Loses Us Both by lilpippin | 4 Review(s) |
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| lucidity | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/6/2005 |
| I love this look through Elrond's eyes. How terrible it must be to have both of your sons in this predicament and you feeling at a loss at how to help them. Author Reply: Elrond is such a fun character to write about, especially when it is about his relationship with his sons. Thanks for reviewing! | |
| MaidenofValinor | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 11/29/2004 |
| Beautiful! My favorite song! I'm listening to it now, in fact, and it's much more touching with the music playing. Author Reply: LOL... that worked out nice then. Anyway, thank you very much for reviewing. I suppose beautiful is referring to the story...*wink* Thank you a lot for reviewing, I really appreciate it! | |
| DeepBlueSomething | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/31/2004 |
| Sounds like this is shaping up to be a very angsty story. Maybe Elladan's close presence will help Elrohir to recover. This is a really great story and I can't wait for more. Author Reply: First thanks for you wonderful comments. This is my first try at angst, so I am glad you say that it is fulfilling its purpose! I am sure Elladan will help Elrohir! They are, afterall, twins! Thanks for reviewing.-lilpippin | |
| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/30/2004 |
| Yes, put the twins together - I'm surprised Elrond didn't think of that before, or that Elladan isn't at his twin's side in the first place. Tell Elladan he can't give up, Elrohir needs him! I think this is the first story I've read where the twins' human blood makes them vulnerable to illness - it makes a refreshing change. Thanks for updating! Jay Author Reply: *tells Elladan* He says he wont! He promises. I have tried to change the outlook on how the twins react when they are hurt. This implies that Elrohir and Elladan have never really experienced any life-threatening events. If it was me, I would not know how ro act in this situation. I would probably try to blame someone and get angry. I kept the usual, Elladan gets angry at himself thing, but I have changed how most people portray him into one with more of a confused role. Does this make any sense? I also figured that since, they have not made their "choice" they would not be considered either of the races. I figure that if they have human blood, they can get sick. I imagine Elrond could still get sick if it was bad enough. Keep in mind I have nothing to prove this, it is merely and observation/ assumption that I made. I am also sure Elrond, would not want Elladan to spend all his time in Elrohir's room. I am sure he would want to protect his sons from death as much as he could. Elrond is also not all-knowing, he may be wise, but everyone is subject to mistakes. Thanks again for reviewing!-lilpippin | |