| Groth Môr by Chris | 3 Review(s) |
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| MlleGigi | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/13/2011 |
| Very clever plot twist...the sign of a talented writer. Until the last two paragraphs, I was thinking exactly what you intended me to think -- that the mother and child were Elves of Mirkwood -- but they're not. |
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| Lamiel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/2/2004 |
| Ooh, nice illusion here. Although I am left wondering, do spiders pray? H'm. Regardless, a perspective from the other side is always intriguing. |
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| Jay of Lasgalen | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 11/2/2004 |
Oh, very creepy! Nicely done - I didn't spot the twist until the end.
Jay |
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