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River of Fallen Stars  by fileg 2 Review(s)
fileg responding:Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/9/2003
Thanks for writing! I am glad you liked the Faramir / Pippin parallel. I have been thinking quite a bit about how much they have in common and how their friendship must have blossomed for Pip to name his son after Faramir.

I hope to write more about their relationship, but this was my first try at Pippin – actually, it was my first try at a Hobbit’s voice. I wanted to give him a little gravitas, since he is so often portrayed as little more than a child – but I want him to still be Pippin! I hoped that realizing Faramir was also put in that “youngest” position might give them a good start to their bond.

Zebra WallpaperReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/6/2003
Wow, this was a very powerful and moving piece. Your imagery is beautiful and I'm even more impressed by how many issues you raised that I've never even considered--such as Faramir and Pippin both being the youngest and considered least-capable. That's just a fascinating insight.
I also like Pippin's reason for why he saved Faramir and his flashback to the conversation with Boromir. That was quite nice and stirring.
Excellent work.

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