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| The Steward and the Queen by Morwen Tindomerel | 1 Review(s) |
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| BKB | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 11/15/2004 |
| You introduced a very point of psychology and circumstances when you show that Idril's desparation expressed itself as serious thoughts of suicide rather running away. Not only would she be influenced by Denethor, but her situation not offer an opportunity to run as Eowyn's did. Speaking of circumstances and psychology, you've introduced Morwen Steelsheen as still being alive during the events of LOTR, What effect would she have had on the domestic and political dymanics of Edoras during Grima's "reign"? Of course, this question is completely tangential to your current story, but it might be something to consider for a new one. As always, I'm looking forward to your next chapter. | |