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The Early Adventures of Fwo and Unga Bee  by cpsings4him 7 Review(s)
shireboundReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/18/2012
Just wanted you to know that I still read these stories, I still love them, and I'm so happy you wrote them.

cherReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/2/2005
I'm not sure how I missed this when you up-dated last time, but I just LOVE chapter 4. I can see wee!Frodo! following the butterfly and getting lost, maybe even within sight of Bag End. I loved that Frodo only knew his mother as "Mum-mee" and I could see Bilbo scurrying around, scared, wondering where Frodo had gotten to.
Nice touch to have Bell and Hamson finding Frodo, and Hamson wanting a baby brother or sister. (Boy, did he get HIS wish!).
Thanks so much for the "angsty-fluff".

Starfire_MoonlightReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/18/2005
I love this!!! I think that its so cute to imagin the ' soon to be Ringbearer' as a little 1 and a half year old lad. And the way you write how Frodo talks is so cute and precious. Makes me smile evderythime I read it. :D

Author Reply: Awww! If I've made someone smile, I've done my job! I'm so happy you enjoyed this. Fwo and Unga Bee are a pleasure and a joy to write.

Thanks again!

Blessings!
cp

nerdinpinkReviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/4/2005
Awwwww! That was so sweet! It made me squeak no less than 10 times.

Author Reply: Heheh! Thank you, Nerdinpink (adorable name, by the way!)! I'm so glad you found it squeakable! :D

Hobbit Lass21Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 1/1/2005
Ooo.....pass me a bucket, I've melted!! Just what I needed today, more Fwo! I found myself freaking out along with Bilbo when they realized poor Frodo was lost!! TBC, Thank goodness!! I'd be perfectly contented if you wrote it forever...

*walks off gushing and melting all over the floor*

Author Reply: Heheh...hope you've managed to re-solidify since this review! :D Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a sweet, enthusiastic review! I assure you I'll keep writing Fwo and Unga Bee as long as the bunnies keep biting! :D

Thank you, again!

Blessings!
cp

IllyriaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/18/2004
Oh, and I forget to tell you that the end scene, with the towel cocoon and Frodo insisting on staying to be Unga Bee's tatapiwwah, and Bilbo asking him if he really wouldn't want wings of himself, and Bilbo's gentle dream... I love that, very, very much.

Author Reply: Awww! I'm glad you liked that fluffy moment! :D

IllyriaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/18/2004
Ooooh, CP, this is simply adorable!!!! I love Frodo's adventures with the butterfly, and Hamson! :) I really enjoyed reading this, CP. Thank you so much!

Author Reply: I'm sorry I'm just now getting around to saying, "thank you" so much for the sweet review! I'm so thankful for each one. I know they say that reviews shouldn't matter, and I suppose I would keep writing no matter how few I got, but well, you know they are always welcome and so appreciated. Thank you!

*hugs!*

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