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Dreamflower's Mathoms I  by Dreamflower 4 Review(s)
Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 4/22/2006
Love the moment with Marigold and her father! That's something you don't see too often.

“Oh and aye, lass, they’ll grow all the better for your little hands helping,” her father would say.

Awww!
God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: I thought it would be fun to show, for just that very reason.

GryffinjackReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/14/2005
What a sweet, beautiful moment between father and daughter. The love between them is plain to see.

It always amazes me when someone can say so much in a drabble. I once tried writing a drabble and it ended up being eight hundred words! lol!

I forgot to reply in my last review to one of your replies from earlier today - yes, I am indeed reading your stories in chronological order this time. The only thing is, I didn't see near the beginning of the list the story where Merry says his first word, yet I know I read it and I cannot recall which story it is. The first time I read your stories, I started with the ones that interested me the most, e.g. Pippin and then Merry, and then filled in with the rest until I had read them all. But this time, I decided that they should really be read in chronological order since they build one upon the other to create such a rich story. I shall have to find which ones are not included in your list so I can read them all again after I am finished with the ones on the list.

Author Reply: I find I enjoy the challenge of a drabble from time to time, although I am by no means the master of them as Rabidsamfan and Dana are.

I have not updated the chronlogy in a while. I have several stories to enter in at their proper place. I tried to do it one day, and my log-in expired before I could hit "save". *sigh* But I will try to get to it very soon!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/29/2004
A wistful chuckle. Very nice.

Author Reply: Glad you liked it!

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/29/2004
'And for one day she did not envy Sam.'

Very perceptive - I hadn't thought before that little Marigold might resent the amount of time that Sam spent with his father.



Author Reply: I'm sure that to her little eyes, it was much nicer to be out in the sunshine with the flowers, than staying home and doing "lass things" with mother. And I am sure that she did envy that time.

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