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| The King's Commission by Larner | 10 Review(s) |
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| Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/16/2006 |
| I never thought about that aspect of having dwarfism (is that what it is?)--that it might be difficult to move about, or that it might even make ordinary things such as climbing stairs difficult. I can well understand Ruvimir's frustration, and can sympathise as well--I can't stand being stared at either, especially when it can be felt or when I'm already feeling self-conscious. That was very instructive, though, so thank you. Oh, okay, Thorongil then...thanks. I won't forget *that* one. Duh, of course that makes perfect sense, since "gil" means star, doesn't it? How careless of me! God bless, Galadriel Author Reply: Yes, Ruvemir is indeed an example of dwarfism in humans. Oftentimes there is malformation of joints; and the legs can be so out of proportion to the body it can be very difficult to do many things. It's not unusual for human dwarfs to walk with decided lurches, as often their legs aren't the same length on both sides. And I'm certain you understand how embarrassing it can be, dealing with stares of strangers. The Eagle of the Star left an indelible mark on Gondor and Rohan; and already Ruvemir is beginning to get the information he needs to realize just who his patron it, although it'll take a time to fully admit it to himself. | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/9/2005 |
| "other than dropping stones down wells." *snicker* Glad I *finally* was able to come back and finish reading this chapter! Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed that one. Poor Ruvemir, out of the loop for that private joke between Aragorn and Gimli. So glad you got to finish the chapter at last. | |
| Lindelea | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/2/2005 |
| I had the thought that Ruvemir and Gimli could trade commiseries (is that a word? I know "commiserate" is, but not sure of the form of what I was thinking) over the travails of riding in ships. Mmmm, I love seeing the White City through your character's eyes. I am chuckling now as Ruvemir tries to fit the pieces of the puzzle together. How long will you stretch out the joke, before he finds out who Strider really is? The Ernil i Pheriannath himself gave us directions on how to best adapt rooms for their comfort. (delighted laugh! ...and the following description so well fits what a hobbit might describe as "comfort", even to the "green and gold" reflecting a hobbit's preference for yellow and green) Halfway through the chapter I am interrupted. *sigh* Hope to get back to this soon. Author Reply: Possibly you want "commisseration," but that isn't quite it, either. Ruvemir is being rather dense about the identity of his patron, isn't he? Where's my thesaurus program when I want it? It was wiped out in the meltdown of my system at Christmastime, I fear. Will have to search through my collection of CD-ROM programs to find it. And I thought the yellow and green was appropriate as well. | |
| lwarren | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/15/2004 |
| Ah Larner, I love the way you take your time allowing the story to unfold...such descriptions! The very appropriate bedroom designed by the Ernil i Pheriannath, the meeting with Elise, and I felt like I was sitting in the common room with Gimli and Ruvemir and Strider (*sigh* wishful thinking!) I love Gimli! He has to be one of my favorite grumpy-grouches of all time...all prickles and caring and hrrummmmphs! :-) Strider's sorrow once more very much makes itself evident as he tells of meeting Frodo and the others in Bree, and their journeys together. This is sooooo good! Thank you... linda Author Reply: Thank you, Linda. | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/8/2004 |
| This is really living up to its promise! I love the slow unveiling of Strider's identity, all the hints and clues--it shouldn't be long before the penny drops, I would think. I especially love the picture *you* are drawing of Aragorn as King--one who works tirelessly and selflessly for his people, and of Aragorn as Frodo's friend--who misses him so much. This is a lovely tale, and I am very much looking forward to more! Author Reply: Thank you. Yes, Aragorn as King would always, I think look to serve his people however they needed his service, on the battlefield, in the throne room, in the Houses of Healing. | |
| LaurelinsSong | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/8/2004 |
| I am completely enamoured by this tale, it's wonderful...please continue Author Reply: Thank you. Am glad it is fulfilling its promise, so far at least. | |
| grumpy | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/8/2004 |
| I love this story. I love how you have written the characters out. Seeing the city , the King's Head and pipes, from Ruvemir's point of view. I think Aragorn is having a good old time keeping his secret. Gimli's is as great as ever. Looking forward to more Author Reply: Thanks. It's fun to imagine what would be where in the city, and how Pippin would have advised the inns to accommodate for his people. As a special education teacher and disabilities activist, I've always found that special accommodations for one group seem to assist plenty of folks whose disabilities are more in the normal range; that an accommodation for Hobbits would work to the advantage of a human dwarf I thought to be a prime example of how this can occur in real life as well as in fantasy. But, so much of the draw of Tolkien's work is how he constantly worked real issues on all levels into his writing. | |
| FantasyFan | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/8/2004 |
| Strider is clearly enjoying remaining anonymous as long as possible. But both he and Gimli have given many clues to Ruvemir, and I wonder how long it will be before he puts the entire thing together. After all, how many groups of four heroic halflings has Gondor seen?? I also wonder if Strider deliberately wants to keep him in the dark about Frodo's identitiy so as not to influence the picture that Ruvemir gets of him from his friends. The details of this story continue to intrigue. Ruvemir's pain and wariness are well-drawn, and his interior dialog amusing. I like seeing Aragorn through the eyes of someone who doesn't know him. Also, I'm glad Elessar thought to accomodate all his friends, and it's a nice touch that Pippin made rooms for hobbits so comfortable. I wonder if, with hobbit rooms, come hobbit-scheduled meals? Author Reply: Hope you appreciate trays of tea and seedcakes, then, and the occasional tureen of mushrooms. ;-) | |
| Grimnir | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/8/2004 |
| I'm truly thrilled by this story. This hide and seek and slow unveiling of Striders nature from Ruvemirs point of view is great. I love the way the artist observes his surroundings and the people around him. He has much a puzzle to solve, since Strider is ahead of him in disguising. And the king deserves a little bit of fun game, it seems. And Aragorn's great respect and love towards Frodo is heart-warming :) Author Reply: Aragorn did live disguised for so much of his life, so I think he would be good at it. And I have always felt there was a special relationship between the King and his Friend. Twin Lights on the Way, as it were. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 12/7/2004 |
| Ruvemir is remarkably talented. It's very interesting seeing this through his eyes - I wonder how long it will take him to cotton on to Strider's identity. It must be such a relief to find himself in a room suited to someone his size, especially since he is in pain. Maybe Strider will be able to help him a bit - although there's probably not a lot he can do for hips. Still, there's always athelas! Author Reply: For all his sensitivity, Ruvemir is in one was a bit slow on the uptake, isn't he? Aid will come, but not yet. | |