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| He Loses Us Both by lilpippin | 4 Review(s) |
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| lucidity | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 11/6/2005 |
| How sad! Elladan may be the one to die, when Elrohir was the one who was sick! Author Reply: Nice turn of events isn't it. LoL | |
| anna | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/12/2004 |
| what do you mean by"never tried to save him"? Author Reply: If Elladan is waiting for Elrohir to go with him and he doesn't show up that is a form of betrayal, at least I would think so. Elladan is waiting for Elrohir to die from his sickness. However he doesn't die from his sickness. If Elladan doesn't feel Elrohir trying to bring him back,he will die form the loss of hope. The last bit "hes too far gone" shows that Elrohir and Elrond don't *know* what to do to save him. In that, we know that 1) Elrohir is not going to die 2) Elladan is waiting for him and 3)If Elladan dies it is because he has lost hope of leaving with his brother. Does that make sense to you. Maybe it will make sense in the next chapter. But if it doesn't then let me know and I will try to word it a bit differently. Thanx for the review! | |
| learwen | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/12/2004 |
| If this is the end,you're killind me,Elladan cant die ,let elrohirs tears bring him back,let 'dan feel Elrohirs tears and his spirit and realise elrohir is getting him better,let him feel the strength in elrohirs spirit and awake,twins with such a connected spirit cannot live long without each other,I know,i am a twin, no one can tell Eldarwen* and I apart and we need each other, sadly, she is the younger,weaker twin.Bring them both back to good health, but yet,you have your own ideas, a wonderful story,heart wrenching.Can't wait for more! Author Reply: Trust me its not the end. What you said with Elrohir's tears... thats a bit typical, I wanted to do something a bit differently. (Whether that be klling them or finding a somewhat different way of bringing them back I will never tell) I am so glad you could relate to this story. I hope you enjoy the future chapters. Thanx for reviewing! | |
| DeepBlueSomething | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/10/2004 |
| Oh no! Now that Elrohir is getting better, Elladan is the one in trouble. Maybe Elrohir has regained enough strength to be able to reach into his bond with his brother and convince him to come back. However, I imagine this would be very dangerous with Elrohir still weak from his illness. I'm sure that Elrond knows this too. Can't wait to find out what happens next. This is really great! By the way, sorry I didn't review last chapter. I was really bogged down with school. Consider this a review for both chapters. Author Reply: no problem! We all have other obligations, thought it would be awesome if our *only* obligation would be to read and write fanfiction. That would be awesome! Anyway, thanks for reviewing. You are right, poor poor Ellie! *huggles Elladan* I can't keep you nearly dead for *too* long. I am either going to have to kill you soon or save you... And *trust me* Elrohir *will* try everything to save his brother. *sigh* The bond of the twins. | |