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| Sentiment's Turn by Mysterious Jedi | 3 Review(s) |
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| Anni | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/28/2004 |
| Ooops, sorry, I left a review before, didn't realize that the story was over. That's too bad that it is, but it was great, once again! =) Author Reply: Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. Maybe I'll write an epilogue of some sort someday, if inspiration strikes, but I really don't know. :) | |
| Anni | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/28/2004 |
| Very good! You really are very good at writing! This story is fun to read, and I hope you continue more soon! | |
| DAYNA | Reviewed Chapter: 9 on 12/28/2004 |
| Wonderful story, Jedi! I really enjoyed it! I would like to see it 'fleshed out' a bit more. You have the basis for some very in-depth characters. You can give them more of a history, give us more insight into their thoughts/feelings and the like. Build on this. You're a great writer! :) Author Reply: Thanks! I think I'll be working more on one-shots for a while, much less pressure, but I may edit this someday and perhaps write some fillers or an epilogue of some sort. You never can tell :) | |