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| Beauty for Ashes by Nina the powerwriter | 1 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 11 on 1/11/2005 |
| All Right!!!! It's out in the open now! Good old Rose, and good old Frodo: those two *did* need just a little prodding, didn't they? I especially liked Frodo's giving Merry advice, it's just the kind of thing he'd do, and Merry would actually listen to, whereas with Pip he would probably just joke around and not admit anything--there *are* some advantages to being the oldest cousin! I did spot about three little grammar nits. I'll send you an email with them, so you can fix them if you like. Good job: now where's the *next* chapter? Back to the salt mines, LOL! Author Reply: Thanks! I don't know why I had been dreading that chapter. It slipped out like a bar of soap in hands...lol! I actually was debating if Frodo or Sam would talk with Merry, but thought it better and more thick is Frodo did. Next sure when the next chapter will be out. I wrote it several months ago, but since the storyline has changed somewhat, I need to re-write it. AH! | |