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The 12Days Challenge  by Grey Wonderer 7 Review(s)
Hai TookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/21/2005
*snort* What an interesting way to incorporate french into the story! ANd through Merry's dream as well! Very amusing! I must say!

Author Reply: Glad that this one made you laugh. It was a bit unusual, but at the time, it was all that I could come up with.

pipinheartReviewed Chapter: 3 on 3/21/2005
Very funny...Pippin is irritatin him to tell him of his dream...Hens throwing eggs at him..Very amuzing...

Then he left a few things out,even Frodo couldn't get out of him...Love it...

Author Reply: Glad you enjoyed this one. It was a rather strange dream, wasn't it?

PIppinfan1988Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/16/2005
Oh...my! ROTF again with their bantering! I LOVE to read this stuff – and you write it soooo brilliantly!! I love it.

PF


Author Reply: You are such a generous reviewer! You always say such nice things. Thanks so much for reading and it is great to hear from you. You have been very quiet lately. Hope that means that you are writing something new.

GamgeeFestReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/15/2005
Chickens and hobbit lasses: now that is one weird dream. Glad I don't drink. I don't know how anyone could live through a hang over and then go drink some more.

Author Reply: You know hobbits and ale! LOL I have a friend whose dreams are even weirder than this and she doesn't drink either. You just never know.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/13/2005
So they kept saying 'we', did they?

On a previous point - perhaps it's a GOOD thing that Merry spent so much time with Pippin, since it cut into his and Frodo's drinking time.

I should think they would happily gift him with a hangover at the moment - if they didn't know that Eglantine would chop them into little pieces.

Author Reply: We was the only French word that I could manage to work into Merry's dream. I realize it isn't spelled correctly, but Merry's French is a bit weak. Poor Merry, forced to stay in trouble because of one cousin or the other. LOL I think he got even with Frodo at least at the end of this one. At least Merry had the satisfation of knowing that he had thrown up on Pippin's foot. LOL

TopazTookReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/13/2005
Ah, oui, je l'aime. :) Truly, I do like it.
These little snippets are so fun. Your dialogue between the cousins is great and so in character.

Author Reply: Thank you! Your French is so much better than mine. LOL I enjoy a bit of teasing between those three. Glad that you enjoyed it!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 1/13/2005
Laughing...

I love the wit flashing between the cousins.

“Is he awake yet?” Frodo asked as he stuck his head into the room.

“Mostly,” Pippin smiled. “Enough to tell me that I’m talking too much.”

“Yes, well, you always do,” Frodo said


and the bit about "When did I become your servant?"

Author Reply: I had fun with this one. My hobbits are slightly smart-mouthed at times. I wonder why? I don't think it's me, but maybe. LOL

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