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| Home Indeed by eokat | 8 Review(s) |
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| shirebound | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 12/18/2005 |
| I just discovered this sweet, loving story. Now I have a big sloppy grin all over my face. :D | |
| Amanda | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/23/2005 |
| Awww that was soo sweet and very fluffy. fluff is good for the soul. I like the way u wrote eomer a lot because I see him as that type of a father too. And I like the bathtub scene, it shows his soft,gentle side as opposed to the warrior and kingly side. YaY for eomer and lothiriel fanfics. | |
| Sulriel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 5/4/2005 |
| sending a note here since I don't see a way to send it privately. in this paragraph. Eomer was resting in his bath, and gently held within his large hands was Elfwine, naked and happily slashing in the warm water. His giggles and the deep chuckles of his father produced a perfect harmony that filled the room. Lothiriel leaned into the doorway, a small smile on her face and her eyes moist with love. I think that you must mean "splashing" and not "slashing" in the water. hope I'm not out of line to post here, feel free to delete this comment once you've seen it. Sulriel. Author Reply: Thanks Suriel...she says with a red face and wonders why no-one else noticed it...It has been ammended. Eokat | |
| DAYNA | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/21/2005 |
| love love love love love it! Lusty Eomer! ::giggles:: Daddy Eomer... the sweetest thing ever! I love these kind of stories, filled with hope and love, family and .... *ahem*. :D no mercy indeed. ::giggle:: | |
| Leaward | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/20/2005 |
| *His gentleness with his babe was so natural, and yet those strong arms that caressed him were also the same that could wield both sword and spear and mete out death in battle.* It's nice to see 'behind the scenes' like this. I have always thought Eomer would have been a great father -- and I love the reference to his gentleness compared to his strength. And the annoyance about the bath-water -- very true to life -- a true mother's reaction. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/19/2005 |
| I can just picture Eomer as a very hands-on kind of parent. The whole culture of Rohan is just so much more practical and less hoity-toity than the Numenorean lords of Gondor. Although that bath-water sounds like germ soup! | |
| Lackwit | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/18/2005 |
| Elfwine and Éomer in the bath together- nice! The dirty bath water, though- :) I am so spoiled by this age of instant communication that I have to keep reminding myself how hard it must be for Lothíriel and the other women to wait for news of their menfolk, and how joyous a reunion it truly would be. Thanks for a sweet story. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/18/2005 |
| There's something really touching in the idea of this fierce warrior being so gentle with his son. Nice story, eokat. | |