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| For the Love of the Lord of the White Tree by Legolass | 3 Review(s) |
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| Tiari Clovis | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/23/2007 |
| Hey there, I'm happy you like following my progress. And I enjoy reading the story just as much! I like this chapter a lot, nice and light hearted. You portray Eldarion very well{The energy of the very young. I have a four year old myself and I've discovered just how much energy they have} and I really like how you portray Arwen. You do a good job on her. The bit about the nap was great. See you next chapter | |
| lwarren | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/8/2005 |
| Eldarion is an engaging child, with the endless questions of the young, too! lol I appreciated Arwen's reason for needing to get away from the city - it must have taken some major adjusting for an elf to get used to living in a city of stone. I also liked the way she is pushing for Legolas to spend more time with Aragorn, and how she realizes even if the hard-headed males around her don't, that distance from each other is the WORST thing they could do right now. They need each other! Silly males! :-/ And of course, Legolas tries to distract her by asking if Eldarion needs a nap! LOL The shadows watching and waiting there at the end made me shiver the first, second, AND third time I read that line! Wonderful stuff, Legolass! linda Author Reply: Oh I am so glad you enjoyed this chapter, Linda. I sometimes go over the whole story and ask myself which chapter I am most pleased with, and I find that each chapter has something to contribute to the story. This one with Eldarion tickles me too, and I find myself smiling at the child. :-) Thank you for your kind words. I hope to hear more from you when you have the time, and I am really glad my story entertains you. | |
| Leaward | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/1/2005 |
| "“Eldarion is not the only one who chafes within the confines of the palace, Legolas,” she said in a huff, and her next words came in a rush as her voice rose." How hard it must have been to go from the beautiful lush valley of Rivendell to a stone city. You can understand her desire to get away like that. LOL about Legolas thinking Eldarion would still need a nap -- of course time would be perceived differently for him than for a mortal child. Author Reply: "LOL about Legolas thinking Eldarion would still need a nap -- of course time would be perceived differently for him than for a mortal child." Yes - hahaha! - again, this was just a brainwave I had! I never planned for him to say something like that - it just came. Oh I just LOVE trying to get under Legolas' skin, so to speak, and to see how he thinks and feels. I just love that elf. | |