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| Drabbles by Acacea | 3 Review(s) |
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| Branwyn | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 5/15/2005 |
| Showing his vision in fragmentary, quick glimpses works so well. It reflects his overwrought state of mind. Also, if he had looked more carefully or considered the nature of the visions, perhaps he would have seen something to give him hope. Beautiful use of language. :-) Author Reply: I'm glad to hear the fragmeneted visions work... yes, he would have been quite distraught, and I think he'd only register what he wanted to, and given the despair he already felt he'd wouldn't have looked closer and seen anything that might construe hope. Beautiful use of language. :-) Aww... *blushes* thanks:) | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 5/13/2005 |
| Oh, poor Denethor; what a sight to see in his already stressed state. Very sad. Author Reply: Yes, he was prety much at the end of his tether, especially with Faramir lying wounded. | |
| annmarwalk | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 3/25/2005 |
| I like the quick flashes of images here: the orb, the fighting, the animals, the sails. Like a thirty-second film, telling your story very vividly and concisely. Author Reply: Thank you again:) I'm glad the effect of scenes flashing works. I think in that state of mind, Denethoir would have only registered all he saw as brief scenes, but they would be all the important scenes. | |