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For the Love of the Lord of the White Tree by Legolass	9 Review(s)
Nurayy	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 7/23/2021
I knew from the beginning of this chapter, when Sarambaq shot up after the thoughts about the wizard what had come to his mind... You build and keep up the tension over more chapters that it is a delight. Also highly straining the nerves, but that's what we like when we're reading the story. It pulls out our emotions and the emotions of the characters. How I loved to see the image of Legolas with his knives. And first refusing to fight. I liked his words calling upon fairness, and the reactions of the Adhûnians. And I did not miss Närums look. When they brought Aragorn, my heart fell as did Legolas'. So cruel! When Legolas put his hand on Aragorn's chest, that was so heartbreaking a gesture. And I wonder whom Thranduil met. I do not remember... Author Reply: Thanks for responding, Nurayy! I like how you - being a wtiter yourself - notice what is written about each character in the chapters. You notice how the character is being developed, their thoughts and reactions which will lead to their behaviour in subsequent chapters. Närum is definitely observing everyone as things unfold. Whom did Thranduil meet? It will come back to you soon enough. :-)

pipinheart	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 9/9/2005
The fear Legolas must feel as he knows Aragorn life is in his hands. It hold the emotion of how much thier friendship means... Author Reply: Oh, my! Horror of horrors! I only JUST saw that I had not responded to this review that was posted in 2005!!! I ALWAYS reply to reviews and don't know how I missed this one for 16 years. I can only apologise profusely and thank you for reviewing. Thank you for having responded to how Legolas must have felt in this chapter - about as horrified as I feel right now.

Bev	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 4/26/2005
Oh my word....must be senility creeping up on me. I don't know why I wrote Faramir when I ment Hamille. blushing...so sorry. Glad to hear we won't be in suspense too long. Bev Author Reply: "I don't know why I wrote Faramir when I ment Hamille." Maybe cozzzz... you like him?? :-) I like them both.

Indigo Bunting	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 4/26/2005
All RIGHT - an update! I've got to tell you, I'm really enjoying your story. I know this is going to sound snotty, but I'm very picky about the fanfiction I read. As pretty much all of us know (through bitter experience), there's a lot out there that isn't very good. Not that this means that all the less-well-written fanfiction is worthless; it's a wonderful window into the world of writing (and reading!) for a lot of younger people. And while that's great in its own way, it doesn't do anything to satisfy me as a mature reader. I'm always hungering for a good yarn - a meaty story with a great plot and good characterization. Your story has both. And on top of that, there are are no grammatical errors, no misspellings, no errors in punctuation - none of the things that make stories difficult to read even when they show promise in other areas. I can't tell you how much I appreciate the time and effort you've surely put into this story to make it not only a fascinating read but technically correct as well. I'm always very excited when I see you've updated! I'm intrigued to find out just how our heroes will get out of this mess. I've got to say, I should have reviewed long ago, but at least I'm doing it now! Now you know that there's one more person out there who IS reading your story and thinks it's fabulous. Keep on with the great work, and don't leave us hanging too long! --Indigo Author Reply: Hi, Indigo! I could swear I'd already sent a reply, but it doesn't appear here for some reason. Anyway, what I wrote in my reply was that I do pay a lot of attention to detail in this story - from the plot to the characterisation to word choice and all the way down to the mechanics of writing. I feel I owe that little respect to the readers, to the story itself, and to Tolkien who began it all. As for not reviewing before: there is always a first time, and I welcome your visit now as I would have if you had dropped in earlier. :-) Thank you for your support - chap 28 is now up.

Tinnuial	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 4/26/2005
You should get a prize for writing the most heartstopping cliffhangers! And I'll be away for a month after tomorrow and may not get a chance to read new posts for some time....sigh But wonderful chapter as usual :) Sarambaq has a rather keen memory I say. Then again, Aragorn is somewhat.....unforgettable....hehehe! Author Reply: Dear Tinnuial: I shall miss your reviews (and thank you for the award, lol). Sorry you have to leave now, because these are the climactic chapters. In one month, I fear the story will be done. But perhaps you prefer it that way - to have it finished by the time you return...? In any case, I hope you do read it till the end when you come back. You, in particular, must. ;-) All the best, wherever you are going.

ArcherGal2932	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 4/26/2005
AHA!!! I WAS RIGHT!!! HE did SEE ARAGORN W/ GANDALF!!!!! lol sry just had to celebrate a bit there. you had to use yet another cliffhanger. TWO actually. well, i think i'll survive, just post quickly. ;-) I love how you not only put Legolas' well-being at stake but also gave it a twist so that his pride and his friend's life was also at risk. applauds very nice, i like i like. ~ArcherGal2932 Author Reply: Thanks, Archer Gal. And here's a glass of "your drink of choice* in celebration of your correct guess. Cheers! :-)

Bev	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 4/26/2005
"And they began"...I feel Legolas has reserves of strength that will suprise everyone. small prayer to the Valar. I am intrigued by the one in the North. Can't wait to find out who it is. Please Faramir...ride like the wind. :-) I loved finding an up-date so quickly....but please....don't leave us hanging...I need to keep a close watch on Legolas...lol. Bev Author Reply: Will probably update again soon for these climactic chapters, lest readers die from death-due-to-waiting, lol! But why do you think Faramir is going anywhere....? Thanks for dropping in. :-)

TithenFeredir	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 4/26/2005
I think it was really effective the way you started with Legolas remembering the events of the night before. I thought you were going to have Sarambaq seriously assault Legolas physically, but it was so much more angst-inducing to just let him know that Aragorn was caught and not reveal his fate. I loved it the way Legolas' first reaction when he was slapped was to be fearful for Aragorn, and the way he sort of broke down and begged the guards for information. Later, it seemed very in character for him to crave the feel of his knives in his hands and to automatically fall into a fighting stance when he got them. If I was Sarambaq, I'd be scared too. The scene where Arwen encouraged Hamille was very nice. As for the mysterioua someone in the north that Thranduil has gone to...I have my own pet theory about who that is. Good story! ~TF Author Reply: Yes, TF - sometimes it is the waiting and not knowing, instead of the physical torture, that is most tormenting. As for your theory (and yes I received your email as well) - you'll have to wait and see. :-) Thanks for your review.

Envinyatar	Reviewed Chapter: 27 on 4/26/2005
I'm ashamed that I haven't reviewed this before. So many post-Quest Aragorn/Legolas stories start from unbelievable premises, with Aragorn glibly abandoning all royal duties at the drop of a hat, but this one is convincing. Well-written, with great pacing, I await your updates eagerly. I'm intrigued as to who this mysterious figure in the North of Mirkwood might be. The only possibility that occurs is the one remaining Istar?? Author Reply: Always a first time, Envinyatar, and I welcome your visit now as I would have if you had dropped in earlier. :-) Thank you for your support. As for the mysterious figure: please remain intrigued for a while longer. :-)

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