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| A Spring of Joy by daw the minstrel | 62 Review(s) |
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| Noor | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 11/3/2016 |
| Just reread this again Daw, it is a very moving story. Would love to hear about SInnarn and Legolas having adventures as adults before the sadness in this story. SInnarn obviously really cares about Legolas as per your story "A creature of fire". As you say in one of the chapters of this story the age gap between Sinnarn and Legolas is even less than that between Eilian and Legolas and this is why they are so close. I really love the OCs as well as the usual suspects. Thank you again! Author Reply: It's been a while since I wrote this, but a sentence sticks in my head. Something about how Legolas and Sinnarn had kept one another's secrets. I find that thought very alluring. They'd maybe know about failed romances, or fear and despair during a battle, or the Shadow sitting so heavily on one of them he can hardly function. I will tuck that idea away for the next time I have a break from original work and am looking to visit these characters. | |
| Asms2 | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/1/2016 |
| Sinnarn! The last 2 chapters of this story pack an emotional punch. I’ve come to love this family through all of your stories and to see Sinnarn die, knowing how much this will pain his family…aww, good writing! You make me feel things. The moment that sticks out most to me is when Ithilden comes to take Sinnarn’s body from Eilian: Eilian says “I am so sorry”. Ithilden says “I know. We will talk about this later, but I know”. OMG I almost teared up reading that part. I was impressed at how well Ithilden and Alfrain, handled the situation, everything considered. I cannot imagine what they were going through, but they are strong people. It’s sad that Emmeline and Elowen sail west. And I’m glad that they at least have each other to lean on. I feel for Annael and his wife who are losing their daughter in a way. But I’m glad Annael is staying. Legolas and his friendship is great. I confess I’ve never read the books, so the concept of sailing west as well as the physical bonds between elfs are a little fuzzy for me. I assume that these physical bonds (where they can feel pain of another) is only between spouses and parents for their kids? Another words, siblings, uncles, close friends, ect, can’t feel it right? Out of curiosity, is the title, “A spring of Joy”, meant to be ironic? It would seem that this particular spring was not one of joy. Lol. But I like it, because it made the darkness of this story stand out. I am thoroughly enjoying your writing and I am sad that I don’t have many more Legolas tales to read. I love this family you created and your take on their relationships and lives. It is really special. Author Reply: Thank you, Asms2. The title of this story is taken from The Hobbit. At the end, after Smaug is defeated, the narrator says the Wood-elves looked forward to a spring of joy after long winter. In fact they had something like 10 years before the Necromancer went to Dol Guldur and evil started to stir again, as you see here. As for the bond between elves, I totally made that up. :-) In my head, it's between spouses and then between parents and children. I felt terrible for killing Sinnarn, but I thought it was unrealistic to believe that none of Thranduil's warrior family would be killed. So there you have it. Afterwards, Bodkin asked my permission to post a story in which Sinnarn is eventually reunited with his family in the west. Here's the link if you want to read it. I know I felt better after I read it: Bodkin's "In the West" http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=4112 Thank you for taking the time to review. You can't know how much I appreciate it. | |
| endorearwen | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 12/4/2013 |
| I thoroughly enjoyed the lighter moments in this story, Daw! I stand with Thranduil in being surprised at how easily Eilian adjusted to life in the settlement. Celuwen may have 'settled' him, but Loriel brought out the truly tender side of his heart! I LOVED the strong bond that exists between father and daughter and the way in which Eilian has finally begun to think about some of the more reckless tendencies that long governed his behavior. Loriel certainly is a chip off the old block - I can walk to the South without my shoes on indeed! I think she has inherited her grandfather's acute sense of 'hearing' the forest. I like that you gave her a heightened sense of that particular Wood-elf character trait! I always appreciate the Legolas sequences! He shines in his new responsibilities and I love the dogged determination he shows in tracking Gollum. I'm always interested in reading about his interactions with men and this chase after the 'creature' provided a nice bit of that with the encounters at Dale/Erebor! I also like how much more comfortable he seemed to be with Beliond and the other warriors around him, teasing them with little hesitation. The friendship he shares with Anneal has always been a favourite for me and I was happy that they were working so closely together in this story. Overall, I think you've done a great job of relating the way everyone senses the Shadow's return and their realization of how precious the past years of peace have really been for each of them. The loss of Sinnarn was a perfect way to bring the walls of peace and happiness down around everyone's ears. I'm glad you wrote Emmelin sailing West after the funeral. There is no other alternative for this poor character, but perhaps now she and Sinnarn can have the elflings she longs to share with him (if such things happen in the Undying Lands?) I'm left wondering if you had planned this part of the plot line out ahead of time so that Anneal's mother would accompany Emmelin in her journey west. This was a natural fit. I did feel quite sorry for Legolas though. He loses the closest thing he's ever had to a 'mother' when Elowen leaves. I was happy that you didn't let Thranduil be left totally bereft of grandchildren when Sinnarn dies. I found the imagery of Thranduil walking away from Sinnarn's smoldering funeral pyre with Loriel in his arms quite touching. An excellent demonstration of what makes the 'Elvenking' the remarkable and powerful force that he is! Author Reply: I loved writing about what a settlement life would be like for Eilian and his family. And really, it's what he needed all along. He has work and responsibility, but also love, life among healthy trees, and a secure home. Well, sort of secure. These things never last, as the Elvenking always knew. The Legolas part of this was the hardest to write because there didn't seem to me to be much tension. Still, Tolkien tells us that Gollum crossed Mirkwood twice searching for his lost ring, so there it is. And he had a good time seeing the statue of his father. :-) I totally did not plan to have Elowen and Emmelin leave together until the situation arose. As a matter of fact, when I wrote the chapter that ends with Emmelin keening, I got such strong reaction from readers that I actually considered backing down and letting Sinnarn live. But I think this is more realistic. And the experience left me in awe of how a story I'd written made readers react. The next "story" is just a few little bits I assembled that all had Loriel in them. There's no overall plot. I hope you won't be disappointed. If you like, you could read Bodkin's story "In the West," which follows Emmelin and Elowen after they sail. There should be no more spoilers in it for you. http://www.storiesofarda.com/chapterlistview.asp?SID=4112 | |
| curiouswombat | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 8/3/2008 |
| Oh dear - you made me cry again. This is probably one of the biggest compliments that I could give a writer - things so well written that they make me cry are very rare. | |
| Agape4Gondor | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 4/3/2008 |
| I was reading 'Home For Now' and realized that I missed 'A Spring of Joy' - what a sad tale this is. Though you show the strength and the courage of the Elves as darkness once again descends upon them, my heart broke. Wonderful, gripping tale! Though I so wish the ending could be other than it is. Author Reply: Writing this story about killed me. Thank the Valar it bothered Bodkin so much that she asked me if she could write the tale of them all coming together again in Valinor. I nearly wept with gratitude. The story's on this site. It's called "In the West." | |
| moonshine | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 10/26/2007 |
| I just read this story over again, and it still made me cry like a baby. Author Reply: I'm Seriously, I do love these characters and I can hardly stand to think of Sinnarn or even worse, his parents. Thank goodness, Bodkin wrote a story resurrecting him in Valinor. Have you read it? It's called "In the West," and is on this site. It perks me right up when I get sad. | |
| Annariel | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 9/5/2007 |
| I'm so sad for Sinnarn, but I liked the Legolas' determination to fight against the shadow Author Reply: I felt terrible for Sinnarn and his family. But it seemed unrealistic to me that Thranduil's family would all escape unharmed. | |
| Joee | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 7/5/2005 |
| Please tell me your next story is going to be a little more light-hearted than this one. Even though I knew what was coming I still ended up in tears, especially after I learned that Elowen would be sailing, for some reason, that just made everything worse. It was a interesting story. Sad, but nevertheless good. Nice job =) Author Reply: I felt better when I decided to send Elowen with her granddaughter. I thought she would understand how Emmelin felt, so they could rely on one another. And I do like the thought of Elowen being reunited with Siondel. But this was a sad story, more so than I realized it would be. I've been experimenting with writing strong emotion and I guess I can do it. When I finished this story, I wrote a short one about Beliond called "The Spy." That's pretty light hearted. At the moment, I'm trying to turn one of my fanfic stories (Growing Under Shadow) into an original young adult fantasy novel, just to see if I can, so I'm not doing fanfic. But I'll be back. I think I need to write a Little Legolas story. That would make me feel better! | |
| Elentari | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/23/2005 |
| Damn and blast! You killed Sinnarn! I was crying from the moment Emmelin fell on the woods through the funeral. And I don't mean a glistening tear... Thranduil's slow move into the king persona, after being 'unguarded' before the whole court, is only as touching as legolas's sudden insight on his father. It is somehow heartening to see Solith is just as set in his ways as he's always been (which is kind of weird when you think about it too hard). The journey through MortalLand was also very telling, particularly legolas's reaction to Thranduil's statue and beliond's attitude when legolas learned of the dwarves being in dale. Still crying, dammit! too good for words. PS_ haven't read the previous fic yet, and had a really big surprise at the death of Tuilinn. Poor legolas. Author Reply: I've been working on tear jerker stories lately, and boy is it depressing! Oddly, the thing I had the hardest time with in this story was making the Legolas part interesting. Eilian's in a tense situation, but Legolas is just sort of wandering around after Gollum and not catching him. But I did like writing about Esgaroth and Dale, and trying to imagine what they'd be like in their rebuilt state. Thanks for the review, Elentari. | |
| caz - baz | Reviewed Chapter: 8 on 6/21/2005 |
| you know you're lucky everybody who reads your stories like them sooo much or you might have been taken to caught for false advertising and causing someone 'emotional stess'. piff... spring of joy my ass. | |