| The Scruff Factor by JastaElf | 3 Review(s) |
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| Celebrian | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 4/3/2005 |
| Good story, only your phrase "Mae govannen, nīn mellon" means nothing in the elven language. And your when Aragorn said "...I could eat a orc" thats a bad use of words. Elves sadly *sigh* are related to orcs, but NOT uriks. They don't want to be. Other than that, Great Story! |
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| LKK | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 9/14/2003 |
| Where to begin in describing the delights of Chapter 1? How about with the second sentence. Of course, there were no clocks in Rivendell, but that was beside the point. That sentence introduces the chapter's tone perfectly. We're in for a delightfully arch time. Whoo-hoo! Very fun. And I love the Twins. My favorite line comes from one of them: Elrohir's I am simply not understanding this conversation. I think I might adopt that one as my own. (If you don't mind, of course.) |
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| Ariel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/17/2003 |
Again, you have me reading stories I might not have otherwise! Thank you, JastaElf, for a very engaging read.
Ariel |
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