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| Mysterious Relations by Merry_the_Hobbit | 4 Review(s) |
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| good_one_pip | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/24/2005 |
| So far, so good Queen V! Cookbooks! A perfect spare reading material for hobbits. However, you have me worried about Pip and Sam! Don't put Pippin through to much pain, at least for my sake. I could barely read "The Palantir" yesterday, and I don't need anymore trama yet:) | |
| Andrea | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/24/2005 |
| And the suspense in growing... Merry obviously doesn't see any danger, otherwise he would never have left Pippin's side. A cookbook is very appropriate and a reasonable excuse for both cousins, not to realize that their friends have not returned yet. What will happen next? | |
| yelena | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/23/2005 |
| Wow! I can't wait to see what happens to poor sam & pippin! | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 7/23/2005 |
| How perfect--a Hobbit cookbook? A couple things--Hobbits don't have attics, particularly in one story houses and single-floor tunnel smials. Second, you had them arriving in the rain, but now the sun is shining through the high windows. Perhaps a bit of transition? | |