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| Ephemeros by Tinnuial | 2 Review(s) |
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| Angelelf | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/17/2005 |
| Wonderful story. I really enjoy the interaction between all of Elrond's children and Legolas. I'm not sure about the 16 points but since it is Middle Earth there very well could be a deer that big. Elves would use all of the deer, including the antlers, in their everyday living. Maybe you could make a ceremony celebrating the deer or something and what he has given them. Also, it would be understandable for the twins to act immaturely around Estel since to them he is still a child. Thanks for sharing your story with us. Author Reply: Thank you for the kind review and good suggestion. I have something planned that would be ....suitable for the story I think. :) Cheers! | |
| Galimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/17/2005 |
| Ahhh! It's good to have you back! Good luck on those exams! As for the stag, I think it's quite possible to have one with sixteen points, heaven knows I would like to see one of those!!! This was a great chapter, and I look forward to more! Galimeril Author Reply: Thanks for the good wishes and also for confirming that I'm not too far off the mark with the stag! You're in luck...new chapter's up today...all I can say is that procrastination gets better nearer to the exam... ;) | |