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Seasons  by Allee 2 Review(s)
elliskaReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/18/2005
It is sad here to see the difficulties caused by the Shadow in their realm weighing on father and son after seeing their previously close and satisfying relationship. I suppose that might happen under such pressures and it is very tragic.

Author Reply: Yes, it's sad the way that good relationships can turn because of the stress of external circumstances.

TithenFeredirReviewed Chapter: 3 on 8/17/2005
Hmmm, you are drawing a picture of growing tension between them, apparent from the increasing darkness, the pressure it puts on Thranduil and from Legolas desire for freedom. And again the leaf implies much about their relationship. Very nice. ~TF

Author Reply: Yes, things are starting to get complicated in this vignette as the tension mounts.

Allee

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