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Twilight of the Gods  by Timmy2222 2 Review(s)
RSReviewed Chapter: 42 on 10/3/2005
NO!!!!! Oh how I hate Harishdane!!! She is pure EVIL!!! She is one person I love to hate. I am really sweating bullets!!! Of course Eomer is fast enough to dodge the sword, right? I hope Aragorn finds a way to release himself from her "power". I hope Arwen finds a way to restore the bond she has with Aragorn. By the way, swtiching from scene to scene is so well done and so vivid. It's just like watching a movie! Oh My God, this is excellent!!! The battle scenes are awesome! My adrenaline went up reading them. WoW.. I cannot say enough. This is beatifully written. It takes the reader into the "front lines" with the soldiers and the battle. Your characters are so well written that this one reader is so involved that she wants to jump into the story and take the sword from Aragorn and help him destroy that evil woman!! Ok, enough..Whew! Can't wait for the next update. Please hurry!

viggomaniacReviewed Chapter: 42 on 9/27/2005
Oh my, this was such an exciting chapter! Totally compelling and tension-filled throughout. I did have that same rather bad feeling about Gishvane that Ridasha did. Why, that horrible Hardishane! She needs to taste the bitter dregs of defeat. And you, naturally, are just the one to ensure that she does! Right? I mean, she is going to have to drink the bitter brew at some point, isn't she? In all seriousness, though, you've captured the *feel* of the battlefield perfectly in this chapter. So much going on, no time to think, people reacting on survival instinct, the rush of events, etc. And what's this she's done to Aragorn? Now *that* was cruel. I just knew those marks weren't put there for nothing. Of course, probably all your other readers figured it out too, but still, I just had to say it. Holy moly! What a position to put Eomer in. This is just too cruel! And Arwen, her connection with Aragorn makes her come to a frighteningly upsetting conclusion. Poor Vlohiri. What emotional turmoil you are putting all of them and us through. You are too good to us, ladies. What an incredible story. Words fail me. Well, almost, that is. Update soon, okay?

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