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| One Heart Protecting Another by Antane | 6 Review(s) |
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| Frodo Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/29/2005 |
| My dear Antane, Two wounds!? Oh, poor Frodo!! Just to let you know, I am really enjoying this story!! It's so.....I don't know how to explain it!! I can't wait to read more!! Namarie! God Bless, Frodo Baggins | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/9/2005 | |
| Well, that was rather stupid, Aragorn. You'd think he would have learned from the first time not to venture too far afield. | |
| Cleo | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/7/2005 |
| Really interesting so far, I like the detail, and the inclusion of the Elvish. The word "okay" really throws me out of the story every time I read it though, as it's a really modern word. The rest of the story is good, but it would be even better if you edited that word out. Author Reply: Hi and thanks for your review. You're right about 'okay' - I've replaced it with 'all right' in most cases and sometimes 'fine'. Namarie, God bless, Antane :) | |
| Elentariel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/6/2005 |
| Let's hope that Elrond, or Glorfindel or Arwen are already on their way. That would certainly speed up matters. It seems better in reflection, as well as worse as you know what will happen | |
| Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/6/2005 |
| No! No! You have me shivering on the edge of my seat! More, more, pleeeeeease! This is remarkable, Antane! It's definitely going on my favourite stories list! But please, please, pleeease post more soon!!! Namarie, and God bless! Galadriel | |
| Starfire_Moonlight | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/6/2005 |
| How could you leave us like that! That is just no fair. *picks up handful of popcorn and throws at Antane* Poor Frodo. And he got stabbed twice too! Please, oh please continue soon!!!:D | |