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| Lords and Rangers by jenolas | 4 Review(s) |
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| lindahoyland | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/8/2005 |
| I imagine that the ring may be to blame for the sudden tension between Boromir and Aragorn as soon as they are near it again ? A tragedy these two will never have the friendship that might have been. Very well written. Author Reply: Thank you. I suppose you might be right about the ring, but it is also possbile that Boromir's sense of responsibility came to the fore and he reprimanded the two as he would his own soldiers. Maybe his words were inappropriate, but he certainly spoke them for the right reason, at least in his mind. | |
| Mum's the Word | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/8/2005 |
| I've been enjoying this story, Jenolas, though I've neglected to review until now. Boromir's thoughtfulness in providing the pastries for the Hobbits was very well done -- and very well received. Your inventive idea of the grass-blade sign left for Aragorn was a wonderful detail. Well done! I especially liked this word picture: "Twilight was rapidly falling, the loss of light turning the warm green, brown and golden hues of the forest to cold shades of grey, and allowing the evening mist to dampen the air." Very good description, and a very effective mood change. I also liked this description: "a hint of elvish pride in his sweet voice." I smiled at the whole interchange, and I appreciated your reminder of the sweetness of Elves' voices. Sad as it was to see the easily bruised egos of the Men, you brought their conflict to a very nice resolution. Well done. Blessings and brownies, Mum Author Reply: Thank you for reading and taking the time to post such enlightening comments. It is always good to learn exactly what appeals (or not) to readers, and especially so when a particular quote touches them in some way. Whilst this story is in no way an in depth study, I think it achoeved my aim of provoking readers into seeing that perhaps Boromir was not such a villain, He was a noble man, a lord of Gondor and had a loving heart for his family and a soft spot for the hobbits. Be well, jenolas | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/8/2005 |
| Very subtle, those signs left by elves. And Legolas's arrival might well be irritating. Two's company, after all. And when Legolas is being best friends with Aragorn, Boromir is shoved out in the cold. But at least the hobbits love him. (They haven't quite got past the posturing stage, have they?) Author Reply: I think Boromir is drawn to th enly other Man on the quest, he is still a little uncertain of his place among the others. Hence the wariness when around them, except the hobbits of course who are nothing but openly affectionate and genuine in their words and deeds. I think Boromir finds their honesty both admirable and refreshing. It is always easier to deal with those who let you know exactly where you stand. | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 7 on 10/8/2005 |
| A very fitting end to their quest for provisions. I liked the encounter with Legolas, and the very faint and subtle hint of movie-verse there (I like such reminders far better than stories that are mostly or wholly set in the film version) and also Boromir's reaction. The scene of reunion was lovely, and I'm so very glad that the hobbits' pastries weren't broken! The apology was also low-key, yet heartfelt. Gandalf's decision to keep the finding of Orc sign a secret from the others also kept this small side-venture squarely in canon. A very nice story indeed! Author Reply: Thanks. When writing, I make an effort to keep 'outside' the scenes as presented on film and in the books. The main story is there for all to read or watch, and I see no reason to include it in great detail, after all it is the little asides that are possible that interest me as a story teller. | |