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Where the Shadows lie  by Lizmybit 4 Review(s)
CmReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 3/20/2004
This was lovely. Very touching and wonderful. I loved how Frodo confided in Merry. I can definitely picture them having this conversation together. i also loved your explanations of the little courtyard Frodo was in and all it's disarray, and the broken birdbath. And I absolutely loved the story about the two pots that Merry told, Merry has long been my favorite character and that seemed just like something he would say. And I must admit I giggled when Frodo made that crack telling Merry and Sam and "Anyone else who is listening" that he was alright. ^_^ Great job.

Author Reply: Thank you very much for your lovely review. It's funny I had forgotten that my story was even here. I am glad you enjoyed it, I enjoyed writing it. If you are interested in other stories, I have more posted on my website (shamless self promotion) www.lizmybitslotr.com

Pretty unoriginal huh? There are also stories there written by others, who have even better stories than I.

Thanks again.

Lizmybit

HaiReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 1/16/2004
That was really sweet! I got shivers when both of them were describing the effects of the Black Shadow! I hope Frodo did continue to talk to MErry, he always seemed so smart! Thank you for sharing your story!

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 11/3/2003
A lovely story indeed! I'm glad I had a few extra minutes to play with the "search" feature and discovered this story! Recognising your name, I found this. Have you written any more?

ShirelingReviewed Chapter: Prologue on 8/28/2003
This is a lovely story

I like the fact that by sharing his memories Merry allows Frodo to examine his own fears.

The doves at the end were a nice touch.

shireling/Helen

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