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The Green Knight and the Heir of Meduseld  by Le Rouret 6 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/19/2005
So, Hobbits of the Shire serve the Lord Legolas and succor him when he has to hide from protocol, eh? Lovely!

LamielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/19/2005
Ah, so it sounds like Legolas will eventually be escorting Fastred to Rohan, as I expected. But I don't mind tarrying for awhile first -- it's something to see Legolas as a lord, with all the courtly courtesies and etiquette that entails. And I'm glad to see Bandy again -- I missed him. But Pearl is here as well? And is ill? Then why isn't Pippin with her? I suppose he's busy being Thain, but I would have thought he'd insist on accompanying her. Ah, but you have a better idea of the real responsibilities of leadership, even in the
Shire.

As always, this is a pleasure to read. I shall look forward to more.

DreamflowerReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/18/2005
Oh joy! Bandy!Bandy!Bandy!Bandy! *grin* And Pearl. Oh, I just *love* her! The picture of the Elven prince with his head in the little hobbit matron's lap was so sweet! What a delight! But...what's the matter with Bandy's mum? I do hope it's not too serious.

Poor Legolas, just trying to get some breakfast and waylaid over and over and over along the way! But I knew that the second he told Bandy he was hungry, then all would be well. Bandy would never let his Master go hungry, and woe betide anyone else who would have tried to stop them then!

*sigh*

Now I have to wait another week...

Indigo BuntingReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/18/2005
What a lovely story! You have such an intriguing way of writing - very medieval. I'm not surprised that Legolas took Fastred in, but neither am I surprised that things did not turn out as Fastred expected. I am sure that he will find himself learning a thing or two about responsibility and duty during his stay with the Elves. That he thinks Legolas spends all of his time fishing and climbing trees shows that there is still much that he doesn't understand. I look forward to watching Fastred's maturation unfold. Oh, and Mistress Pearl and Bandy? Too wonderful! I look forward to seeing more of them as well.

Indigo

Aislynn CrowdaughterReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/18/2005
Hi!

This chapter was very funny and had me relax a bit about this story. As a rule I am not very interested in stories how insubordinate children are tamed and broken to society after they show the proper repentance, since I hate the moralistic and paedagogically raised finger in these things telling how much better it is if the children follow the grown-ups (yawn), and I was beginning to fear this story would be solely about *that*. But this chapter was a bit of fresh air, showing everything I love about the Green Knight universe! Legolas' hopeless attempts to escape his busy subjects and reach breakfast was very funny, and Bandorbas was like a gust of fresh air! Very lovely! Plese write more soon!

Aislynn

eliza61Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/18/2005
Mae Govannen Le Rouret,

What a wonderful chapter (and story). I definitely enjoyed seeing Legolas's world at home & how trying to do a simple thing such as get a bite to eat can turn into a comedy routine! Some times I think of elves as these perfect beings who never have to worry about having a bad day. I think the Legolas, Kaimelas & Galas need a few more eflings around to drive them crazy. (humm maybe Eldarion could run away too...)

Until next time,

Your fan, Eliza

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