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New Roads and Secret Gates  by Citrine 5 Review(s)
Celeste Lucretia BlackReviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/27/2021
Oh no...

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/26/2005
The fear for ones kin and favorite younger cousin-brother came across well here.

Anso the HobbitReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/23/2005
Oh, that was powerful! Poor Merry, worrying and blaming himself.

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/22/2005
O yes, nicely done. Absolutely heart-rending. The desperation-laced interior monologue...

And this:
but I'll perish here with Boromir if it means you might escape

Yes, I can see Merry saying that.

And more? Is that a promise?

Author Reply: The desperation-laced interior monologue... Aw, shucks, you and Dana are my inspiration there-I imitate..er, learn from the best;o)But seriously, thanks for dropping in here and giving it a read.
And there is more hobbity stuff on the way, God willing, and the hobbit-Muses don't hop a bus to Vegas.

ArmarielReviewed Chapter: 6 on 10/22/2005
Beautiful--spare, economical yet emotionally very gripping.

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