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| Burden of Guilt by Linda Hoyland | 4 Review(s) |
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| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 11/3/2005 |
| Oh, good. At last you have them back in the same room at least! I think I am enjoying this even better second time around - less suspense and more time to appreciate the details. But the suspense in your other story is killing me let alone the King! And your choice of quotes are inspired. How on earth do you keep finding them? Author Reply: I 'm honoured you feel the story is worth reading twice. I'm glad you are enjoying Web of treason too.Sometimes like tonight,a quote comes to mind,other times, I have to type a key word in a quotations finder.A friend suggested the one for chapter 21.I hope they help to add to to the mood of each chapter. Many thanks for your much appreciated review. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 11/3/2005 |
| Obstinate could certainly be Faramir's middle name. It is at times like these that his descent from Denethor can clearly be seen! He only seems willing to accept help when unconscious - so it's just as well he is! Eowyn and Aragorn must be ripping their hair out. Author Reply: Faramir is certainly obstinate and also very depressed, a potentialy lethal combination.Aragorn and Eowyn have a very difficult task ahead of them. Many thanks for your much appreciated review. | |
| Lady Jaina | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 11/2/2005 |
| I'm glad you update quickly, and also glad to hear that this is only halfway!! Another great chapter. You have done an excellent job capturing Eowyn's spirit, and I love the way you have written the character of Faramir! Author Reply: I'm so pleased you like the way I depict Faramir and Eowyn.Thank you so much for your kind review. | |
| French Pony | Reviewed Chapter: 30 on 11/2/2005 |
| Yes, Faramir does need a direct order. Perhaps Aragorn doesn't have the aura of command that comes with being a true working physician, but he does have the aura of command that comes with being the leader of the Rangers and now the King. Time to use some authority here. As usual, Éowyn has the right idea, though I wonder how she managed to miss Aragorn's medication orders for Faramir. To whom did he give the orders, if not to Éowyn? After this is over, Aragorn will have to decide if he wants to be a King or a physician. And he's going to have to start acting like one or the other. Author Reply: I am certain in any other case save this one, Aragorn would use the full weight of his authority but he feels so much that Faramir's injuries are his fault that he makes him hesitate when action is needed. Obviously Faramir was supposed to tell Eowyn about what herbs he was supposed to take but chose not to .Eowyn believed that ARAgorn was treating him. Many thanks for your much appreciated review. | |