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Burden of Guilt  by Linda Hoyland 3 Review(s)
Lady JainaReviewed Chapter: 34 on 11/13/2005
As always, excellent work. I enjoyed Aragorn's distress...it is something one rarely sees in a fanfiction story.

Author Reply: I like to write Aragorn as a real human being with feelings as well as a king.Thank you for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you are enjoying the story.

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 34 on 11/13/2005
Good for Arwen. She is the glue holding this lot together at the moment. And Eowyn is doing her best - although she still needs to mature, like a good cheese. I'm not surprised Aragorn is close to the edge, though. Between them, Eomer and Faramir are not exactly co-operating.

Author Reply: I don't know what the others would do without Arwen,of course she is much older and wiser than anyone else !
Many thanks for your much appreciated review.

French PonyReviewed Chapter: 34 on 11/12/2005
Yes, Arwen, give Aragorn that slap in the face that he so desperately needs. If his Vulcan Mind Melding with Faramir is to be at all successful, Aragorn is going to have to be in decent shape emotionally. Spending some time with the wise words of his wife is going to go a long way towards preparing Aragorn for this drastic step.

Author Reply: I don't know what Aragorn would do without his wife ! I did indeed base the Thought Bonding on Vulcan Mind Melds with a few differences,mainly that it can only be done if both wish it and already are close.
Many thanks for your much appreciated review.

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