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Voices of Middle-Earth  by Armariel 2 Review(s)
LarnerReviewed Chapter: 35 on 11/13/2005
Ooh, love Gandalf in Iambic Pentameter. So formal sounding as he summons Shadowfax and rejoices at his coming for the time of need.

Author Reply: Thought maybe I could get away with trying to be Shakespeare as long as I was writing Gandalf. Really wanted to make it a sonnet but it wouldn't quite cooperate! Silly muse. Oh well, must let her have her way.....

Thanks for reviewing!

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shireboundReviewed Chapter: 35 on 11/13/2005
your muscled haste fulfils my destiny.
No master am I, and no beast are you
partners we


Oh my, this is beautiful. And this is just magic:

And when victory's dead tree blossoms fresh
and all freed wastelands cradle their first spring
and forgiveness is the song of life
we'll cross the heaving waves still bound as one
horse and rider, winged in healing space.


Author Reply: Thanks! I'm so glad I get to see lots of horses when I drive to and from work...they're such inspiring creatures!

hugs
Armariel~~~{~@

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