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| Moriquendi – The Eryn Lasgalen Cycle by fan81981 | 11 Review(s) |
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| Miss | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/30/2006 |
| Wow!!! So much distrust and yet they both WANT to believe.......... You did a good job on this chapter. The mistrust between Arandur and Cohtion, between Rinhure and Legolas. Arandur and Rinhure have the same dillima really, but Arandur has come to a choice.... Thx for this wonderfull update!!!!Now up to chap 7!! (I thought I'v read this chapter, that's why I leaved a review on the seventh chapter) | |
| vampfan30 | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 5/22/2006 |
| read this story a few months back & enjoyed every minute of it. when will we see more??? I gotta know what's gonna happen!!!!!!! | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 4/27/2006 | |
| I just read this story, and I was wondering whether you'll update it anytime soon. Please? | |
| miss | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/18/2006 |
| Update update update update..........when WILL you update?!!! | |
| Strange Blaze | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 2/4/2006 |
| Here I am finally caught up on this wonderful story. I cannot praise it enough! The political intrigue is amazing, just edge-of-your seat. The dialogue is crisp, and it just FLOWS. The whole thing is just romantic, and tremendously, fantastically sexy. Your language and descriptions are gorgeous overall, and your characterizations superb. Thranduil is great, Legolas is perfect, and Rhinure is one of the most unique and well-developed OCs I have ever seen. I can't wait for more of this story. | |
| Chelsea | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 1/7/2006 |
| Again another fantastic chapter, I really am fond of this story and all of the characters in it. I can not wait to see how the next chapter plays out. | |
| LORE | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/23/2005 |
| Mmmm... I sense a shift comming on (grin). I've been waiting exitedly to see what exactly will come of the relationship between Rhinure and Cothian, especially in Legolas' view. It seems to me that Rhinure and Cothian are so close because he has played so many psychological roles in her life; Father, as her mentor, Brother as a fellow Avari, Son because she is the in an abstract way the mother of her people and he is her hier. I'm curious to see if some of Cothian's distaste for Legolas' behavior does not come from his own want to fulfill the role curretly held by Legolas in her life... sorry! Just finished some studying for my Psych. exam, I'm going a little nuts and overly anylitical! (hahaha). Great Chapter, keep it up! | |
| Amanda | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/20/2005 |
| You updated, woot!! Another great chapter. the conversations were amazing and added soo much to the chapter. the last scene when rhinure doubled over and she sees all those memory flashes with legolas - very touching i really feel for her. You portray the complications very well, with the secrets and everyone following everyone- I loved it. there were some errors like words or letters left out, fix it cause your wriitng is just too beautiful to have errors like that. Update , waiting for the next chappie. | |
| Idhreniel | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/16/2005 |
| One of your best chapters, especially the dialogues. There is a serious thing, though: you left us longing for more. I am still thrilled with Thranduil. He is the best in this chapter. And life for Rhinure is not fair indeed. I wonder how she will deal with Legolas now. | |
| LOTRFaith | Reviewed Chapter: 6 on 11/15/2005 |
| You are killing me!!!!!!!! I just finished a book with an ending like this... I won't learn what happens in the book until next year... I'm praying it won't be the same with this... ;-) Secrets... A lot of secrets. Thranduil's secrets. Legolas' secrets. Rhinure's secrets... Rhinure is hurting Legolas far deeper than she can imagine I think. Her very lifestyle is being torn apart by her love of Legolas, but her duty to the Avari has stronger threads. Thus she is being pulled in two directions and Legolas doesn't seem to quite understand it all. Which I can totally understand because no one is letting him understand anything. The Avari want something, they need something and Thranduil and Legolas seem to be the only way to their goal. It literally hurt to read "And it was a sound that tore at his bruised heart." Legolas is in agony and I think perhaps only two could truly understand his pain. Thranduil and Herenion, the two who actually know him. This is a very complicated chapter I must say :-) So many emotions and thoughts tossed around :-) I truly do hope you update soon... I am going mad with all the new little pieces I have been given to the large puzzle :-) | |