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| Just Desserts by Lindelea | 5 Review(s) |
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| Pearl Took | Reviewed Chapter: 32 on 11/26/2005 |
| Tricksy Hobbits indeed ;) and most all little ones. Sorry my reviews aren't as long as some of the others, don't take that as a sign of any less enjoyment or appreciation on my part, I'm loving this story :) Author Reply: O but I am very glad for your reviews! And sometimes when I'm in that place where no words come easily, and I read during what would be normally "writing time" because it's all I can do, I write awfully brief reviews because I can't think of anything to say... but I still hope the author will be blessed by the feedback... as I am! | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 32 on 11/24/2005 |
| That tailor is a very brave and compassionate man - who deserves to have his good qualities recognised. He would make an excellent counsellor to whoever rules in the north. The sort of person who keeps all around him honest. I love the term 'life warrant'. Something to treasure. Although it's going to take time to sink in. Good for Denny - coming out with Gwillam's comments and saving him the scolding! The twist with Robin and the young hobbits revealing the value of pretending sleep to hear what is not intended for young ears is delightful. A twist that Merry recognised perfectly from his experience with Pippin, too. Is the next thing to hear what Pippin and Ferdi are up to? The intricacies of this story are so enjoyable. I never know who I want to learn about next! Author Reply: You know, you're right about the tailor. I wonder how it would come about, for him to be made a counsellor to the temporary Steward of the North-kingdom. Well, you get to hear about what Pippin's up to... Ferdi isn't exactly "in" on it, but he does get pulled in whether he will or no. Although it makes a completely separate story that will not be continued here, except for mention in the Epilogue. This story is very nearly done, can you believe it? | |
| harrowcat | Reviewed Chapter: 32 on 11/23/2005 |
| At least those who listen whilst pretending to be asleep get to hear truth and not rumour. Got a great giggle out of the advice for pretending and it wasn't the expected way round either! Loved the way that, at least some of the towns folk want to rally round the family even if it feels slightly treasonous. Author Reply: Truth and not rumour! I hadn't thought of that... It would be a hoot to write an auction with one person bidding on each item, and then nobody else, and everything being bought for "pennies on the dollar"... "What'll you give for this fine bed, solid carven wood it is..." "Ha'pence!" | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 32 on 11/23/2005 |
| Oh lovely! I love that the neighbors are all set to save as much as they can for Gwillam and his family--but I have a hunch that things are not what they appear to others. I would bet that the family is set for a distinct rise in status... And I had to giggle at the little exchange about listening children who seem to be asleep. And it wasn't only children who pulled those stunts--after all Sam was full grown when he pretended to sleep while Gildor spoke to Frodo in the Woody End, LOL! Author Reply: Well, usually your hunches are pretty sound. I noticed (afterwards) that Sam was not saying anything about pretending sleep--but then, it is not yet clear if he's there or with Pippin and Steward and King, discussing... future development. The next chapter is still in the works. | |
| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 32 on 11/23/2005 |
| Aha, is it King, Thain, Steward, or a combination of the three who is seeing to the refurbishing of the home behind the linen shop? So proud of the neighbor who would get all to agree to bid for the goods of the family that all might be restored to them. Very proud indeed. The type of citizen Aragorn must be proud to rule. May his business bloom and prosper. Author Reply: LOL, can't pull the wool over *your* eyes! I do like the tailor, resolving to use his "little bit put away" to save what comforts he can for old Gwill. He was also the one who organised the committee to speak to "someone in authority" about the apparent miscarriage of justice. Good man. I'd imagine he's quite well respected amongst the merchants. | |