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The Making of a Man  by TigerLily713 1 Review(s)
daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 2 on 8/19/2003
I hadn't read this before. I assume it got lost in the morass at ff.net. I like your dialogue and the way you use it to show characterizations. I stopped to review at this point because I live in a place where blizzards happen and they are no joke! So I was caught up in this. I usually have no patience with grown adults who run away but this was a bad situation.

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