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| Don't Panic! by Boz4PM | 5 Review(s) |
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| Ivy | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 7/30/2006 |
| Bloody BRILLIANT. Ah, I can't decide if I'm inspired or terrified to try continuing my story, lol. I was wondering when she was going to let fall some names and have him stare at her in shock...your portrayal here is very good. By the way, what is WETA? I know it's something to do with authenticity, but I can't remember... Nice job. I'm sorry it's not a longer review, but it's all I can really say, because there is nothing to criticize, lol...oh, except make sure that you use "might" instead of "may" in "he suspected he may never discover it". Otherwise, the grammar/spelling/etc. is great. Ciao! Ivy :) http://www.fanfiction.net/~folk | |
| Nienor Niniel | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/21/2006 |
| Oh, I think that him just leaving her in Bree would be an interesting alternative storyline. How would the people react? But I guess it will be a lot better if he drags her to Rivendell. This is really realistic! And I am torn between pitying both of them. They both are so completely right with the things they are annoyed at. What a dilemma! I love your AN! It's great when people actually know that! I'll read on, of course! Nienor Author Reply: Thank you for your comments and taking the time to review (let alone read). I am glad you are still finding it interesting and enjoyable. :) | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/8/2005 |
| You can't blame her for getting hysterical really. She's been stuck among a bunch of incomprehensible weirdos - and they wave swords at you for mentioning a few names! On the other hand, it must have been a nasty shock for Halbarad. And a bath - even a Bree bath - can soothe a lot of ills. | |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/7/2005 |
| She sighed in frustration. God, this guy was a complete IDIOT! He was roleplaying something he didn’t even know the author of, let alone seem to even have SEEN the movies. This was getting weirder by the minute. *LOL* From Penny's POV it must be something like this, oh yes! What a shock for Halbarad to hear Aragorn's childhood and crown names from Penny! Of course now she is highly ominous! No wonder he drew his sword - and frightened her to death! She certainly didn’t seem dangerous. Incompetent: certainly. Mad: quite possibly. But not dangerous. Intelligent man, our Halbarad ;-) But I am sorry for him - he can't understand why Penny behaves so weird! And all in all he was quite nice to her, bought even shoes for her. Penny shouldn't have snapped at him so! | |
| meckinock | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/6/2005 |
| I love Halbarad's "oh, shit" moment when the crazy unintelligible lady starts spouting recognizable and alarming names in the middle of her gibberish. And Penny's bath is hysterical. I love the way you've clearly put a lot of thought into the technical end of this, but it comes across very fluidly. This is a riot. Author Reply: Thank you. Yes, I am a little anally retentive about detail and avoiding plotholes - I think it shows in my fics. *lol* | |