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| Don't Panic! by Boz4PM | 3 Review(s) |
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| Aranel of the Golden Flower | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 11/7/2006 |
| I have to say I think that marmite is BEAUTIFUL!! this story is pretty good too!! Author Reply: Ah, another Marmite fiend? Good, good. :D Glad you're enjoying the story so far. :) Thanks for reading and taking time out to review. | |
| phoenix23531 | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 12/14/2005 |
| Ok, I know I promised to review each chapter, but I had to compromise. So I read through to the end. So I appologize both for the delay in congratulations and for the mass lump of emails you're about to get. Chapter 17 - I was a bit confused at her absolute abhorance to riding, but as I talked to a friend of mine, she told me of her utter fear the first time she rode a horse and convinced me that this type of reaction wasn't far from the norm. I haven't ridden often, but have always loved horses and riding, but you wrote of Penny's fear so well that I could begin to understand it. Gandalf's calling Pippin a Nincompoop was hilarious. Priceless! And Mireth is turning out to be a hoot. The chuckles I had over Penny's being surrounded by gorgeous ellyn and not losing it completely - as a stereotypical Mary Sue would have done in about the first line of chapter 1 - was well worth the odd looks I got from my colleague. I tell you, I'm going to get fired one day for laughing so hard over all this. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 12/10/2005 |
| Have you seen the beautiful girl / handsome boy - come up for coffee ad? Where she eats Marmite and he makes like she tastes of poison? Poor Penny. A male elf overdose. Some people live through intolerable hardship. | |