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| Imrahil's Daughter by Madeleine | 8 Review(s) |
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| Ana | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 9/27/2013 |
| Oops! What was I thinking of? I meant acknowledge. Ana | |
| whitewave | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 6/28/2008 |
| Loved the second "first meeting" scene here and pretty much everything else in this chapter! It's so romantic-movie-like! Poor Eomer didn't know what hit him! I enjoyed the sensual tension and romantic undertones of their "argument" and Lothy's line: "After all, with three brothers I have lots of practice in forgiving stupidity,” was priceless! And Erchirion's: “Unfortunately sororicide is illegal in Gondor.” | |
| Kitty | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/11/2005 |
| So jetzt komme ich endlich mal dazu, meinen Senf dazuzugeben! Ich muß ja zugeben, ich habe durch Zufall den Rest im OSA gefunden und gelesen, soweit Du dort gepostet hast, und einen Heidenspaß dran gehabt, aber es hier nochmal in Ruhe zu lesen, ist schön, und es gibt einem die Möglichkeit, ordentliche Kommentare zu schreiben. Armer Éomer, manchmal ist er ein wenig zu ehrenhaft – zu meinen, er könne Lothíriel nicht haben, weil sie Imrahils Tochter ist! Andere würden ja sagen, er hätte sich in eine Frau verliebt, die standesgemäß ist, nicht wahr? Ihr erstes Aufeinandertreffen seit dem denkwürdigen Abend in den Häusern der Heilung war ja sehr unterhaltsam. Willow bark tea! Also wirklich! Und Aragorn hat offensichtlich schon Lunte gerochen, daß Lothíriel dem guten Éomer sehr gefällt – er muß sich köstlich amüsiert haben über die zwei. In diesem Kapitel gibt es so viele nette Stellen – der denkwürdige Smalltalk der beiden auf dem Weg nach draußen, ihre offensichtliche Auseinandersetzung schön in Sicht von jedermann, Erchirions Auftauchen und sein Gespräch mit seiner Schwester ... durchgehend sehr unterhaltsam zu lesen! Author Reply: Ich denke Éomers Dilemma ist, dass er eigentlich überhaupt nicht heiraten will, Lothíriel aber eine Frau ist, die er nur als Ehefrau haben kann. Und noch glaubt er, auf sie verzichten zu können. Er wählt sozusagen das kleinere Übel. Übrigens: Weidenrindentee ist ein erstklassiges Heilmittel gegen Kopfschmerzen und bei fiebrigen Erkältungen. | |
| Chibi-Kaz | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/8/2005 |
| YES! At last, a ficcer with a truly literary background!!! I absolutely adored how you worked in the reference to "The Lion In Winter", quite possibly my all time favorite script. Do all Rohirrim have knives? *evil grin* Cheers, and can't wait for more, Chibi-Kaz Author Reply: For some reason Geoffrey has always been my favourite of that wolfs pack. He is definitely the son with the most brain (I think). Do all Rohirrim have knives? - Yes, I think they have, but I have never considered them being barbarians. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/8/2005 |
| Something happens as soon as these two set eyes on each other that is quite magic. They both lose all common sense - and awareness of what is happening around them. I love the very public debate. As if it is Lothiriel's fault that Eomer didn't know who she was! What kind of healer goes round announcing to all and sundry that she is a princess? And he feels so deliciously awkward because he has been having lewd thoughts about his friend's daughter. And, behind him, to his complete ignorance, all those noble well-wishers' brains are clicking and coming up with the thought - 'very suitable match'. Little do they know that they are doomed! Author Reply: Lothíriel is certainly blissfully unaware what is going on around her; Éomer does realize that they have attracted an audience - by he doesn't care. | |
| Nilmandra | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/7/2005 |
| I loved this chapter the second time around too. The verbal sparring was very well done. :D Author Reply: Love match or sparring partners? What would be more fun for the onlookers? | |
| Gandalfs apprentice | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/7/2005 |
| This is fun! Good writing. I'm eager to read about the feast.... Author Reply: I suppose by now you've learnt that I skipped the feast. Hope it's still fun to read, anyway. | |
| daw the minstrel | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/7/2005 |
| Well that was rousing! I love seeing two clever strong people argue like this. But it sounds as if they have some explaining to do now. That should be even more fun. Author Reply: Can you imagine how it is, when you expect that everybody is going to grill you about your behaviour but nobody actually does? | |