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And in the Darkness Bind Them: Part One  by Space Weavil 3 Review(s)
AerenosReviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/11/2005
Again, another very well-written chapter. As the others have pointed out, it is hard not to be sympathetic toward your protagonist despite what we know about his future 'endeavours'. I like the tension you've created and enjoy the imagery you've created.

ShemyazaReviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/11/2005
The whole thing is both atmospheric very sensitively written. The ambience surrounding the stories and the building up of the characters is splendid. Very much what I've come to expect from ALL of your stories.


BodkinReviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/10/2005
Ooh, scary. The boy in the bed. Imprisoned and invisible. And Marillion is caught where he shouldn't be.

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