And in the Darkness Bind Them: Part One by Space Weavil | 3 Review(s) |
Aerenos | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/11/2005 |
Again, another very well-written chapter. As the others have pointed out, it is hard not to be sympathetic toward your protagonist despite what we know about his future 'endeavours'. I like the tension you've created and enjoy the imagery you've created. |
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Shemyaza | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/11/2005 |
The whole thing is both atmospheric very sensitively written. The ambience surrounding the stories and the building up of the characters is splendid. Very much what I've come to expect from ALL of your stories.
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Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 12/10/2005 |
Ooh, scary. The boy in the bed. Imprisoned and invisible. And Marillion is caught where he shouldn't be. |
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