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| The Last Yule in Halabor by Soledad | 2 Review(s) |
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| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/25/2005 |
| Oh my, this is very interesting! I like how you have used the one major character flaw of the Dunadain here: pride. It was, after all, pride which had laid Numenor low, which led to the downfall of the line of Kings, and of course which led to Denethor's downfall. I look forward to seeing how this plays itself out. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 14 on 12/15/2005 |
| Well, it's not surprising that Odhrain is bitter - but he has had more opportunities than most and is in a better position than many. Curious as to how this one works out. | |