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The Redemption of Meriadoc by Aelfgifu | 1 Review(s) |
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Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/27/2005 |
You have done well with your betas, I'll have you know, and the second story is much better because it appears to have a point and isn't relying strictly on Frodo-torture for its draw. Merry is reaping what he's sowed, and is beginning to realize juat what he's done to Frodo. Nice to see the moments of Frodo beginning to return briefly before disappearing again into the secret place where he's learned to hide. | |