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The Lucky One  by Antane 4 Review(s)
Frodo BagginsReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/8/2006
*gasp* oh, Antane! This is...this is ever so sweet! Oh poor, dear Frodo. I am forever loving this story of yours. You do angst so well, and then you never fail to bring plenty of TLC. Still...my heart aches for Frodo's pain. And Sam is ever the faithful, sacrificing for his loved ones. Namarie, mell min. Ellen sila lummen ommen tielvo! God Bless, Frodo Baggins

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/27/2005
Personally I doubt Frodo was quite all that ill at ease when he returned, although I like how you write it and the gentle love that helps to ease it.

Author Reply: I don't know if you read the first part of this or not, but since he's gone through this hell twice now, I think it would affect him sooner and deeper than before. But as you know he's going to have his good days and bad days.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Starfire_MoonlightReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/27/2005
Another sweet, heart-warming chapter. Really liked this bit-

It’s too close to bedtime," Sam insisted when he first announced it when Frodo had returned to the story after their walk.

"Bedtime?! But that’s hours away, Sam," Frodo protested. "It's barely even tea time."

That sounds like Sam, alright, always lookin' out for Frodo.
Keep it comin', Antane! You know we love it. :D

Author Reply: Yes, very Sam-like. :)

Queen GaladrielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 12/27/2005
I've been watching my inbox all day for thi...and it was certainly well worth it! A beautiful, beautiful chapter! And you continue to amaze me with the way you so beautifully portray the love between these two brothers of the spirit, and of the way you think of the perfect places for these songs! I'll think I've come up with the perfect one, and then it's something totally different and much more moving. I tried to sing this one just now and got choked up, just because of the picture you painted with your words. Oh, I can't wait to read more! Namarie, God bless,
Galadriel

Author Reply: Thank you, my dear!

Namarie, God bless, Love ya, Antane :)

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