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| Masquerade by Elendiari22 | 5 Review(s) |
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| galathil | Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 2/27/2011 |
| This is a scary fun story.Have you got any more that involes all of them? As the king stated there a more rooms to explore.Maybe you can throw in Celeborn Elrond and company,or a mystery or two in Rivendale or the other elven havens before they sail.Looking forward to more of these wonderful stories. Galathil | |
| Nimloth Bradamante | Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/29/2006 |
| Oo! It continues! And now we're getting some answers. Write more as soon as possible, please! Just a side note--I love the characters, you don't have a vendetta against any of them (most fanfic writers hate either Arwen, or Eowyn, or Faramir, or Boromir, or SOMEONE) and you give them all lovely personalities. My one criticism is made reluctantly. Much as I love the character you give everyone, it is only one character. Makes them a little hard to distinguish. No, it's not so bad as I've made it sound; they are by no means perfectly identical, but they just don't seem to be sufficiently different. However, that doesn't stop me loving the story and wanting more NOW. I love the Eowyn/Faramir bits, the Eomer/Lothiriel bits, the Aragorn/Arwen bits, the Eowyn/Arwen friendship. Much fun. And Frodo not characterised as a saintly/whiny/weak/nonentity type character. Thank you. | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/3/2006 |
| Ohhh, well done! I can imagine writing this in the middle of a stormy night would be, shall we say, a bit disturbing!Wonderful plot turn. Your villans just get nastier all of the time. Now, I wonder how much the Lord Captain and the rescueing party knew about what Findiulas had been up to in that wing? And how much can our curious Hobbits get out of him? I am enjoying this, very much. Author Reply: Thank you! Yes, my villains are definitely making their evils known. And a certain Thorongil will be answering some questions, methinks. The next update should be coming soon. | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/3/2006 |
| I'm not surprised this managed to keep you awake! Very spooky. But the sort of story that needs to be taken out into the light of day. Particularly when you happen to have powerful elves and a wizard around to be helpful. I hope you are in full flow with this - because I really want to know what the Librarian is revealing and hear what the diary contained. I think they should go and tell Aragorn NOW! On a lighter note, I'm glad that Faramir (the man of words) was rendered speechless by the vision of Eowyn as dressed up by Arwen. And that Eomer and Lothiriel seem to be taking a remarkable amount of interest in discovering astronomy. Author Reply: I think I'm in full flow with this, because I've finally figured out what has to happen before it can end! Everything's come together in my head, finally, and now I just have to write it down. As soon as the Librarian tells the rest of his story, they'll probably go straight to Aragorn. Hee, Faramir! And Eomer and Lothiriel, as well. This fic needs some humor to lighten things up. Glad you like it! | |
| Dreamflower | Reviewed Chapter: 19 on 1/2/2006 |
| OOoooh, yesss!! I can see how you managed to creep yourself out! This is *seriously* creepy! *whoosh* It takes me back to the mood you created in your very first chapter, of something ominous and dire both having happened and about to happen. Author Reply: Let me tell you, I didn't get to bed until two because I was so jumpy. And I managed to scare myself silly by catching my own reflection in the mirror behind me. It was not my night. :) | |