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| Pitfalls of the Palantir by Haleth | 4 Review(s) |
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| aelfwine | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 7/24/2011 |
| I hope you dont mind my proofreading a little? I found another typo in "I don't have years(to)analyse everything" Author Reply: Thank-you. Proof reading is always appreciated. I've added the to. Analyse/analyze is a British/US spelling difference. | |
| Kathy_SFF | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/9/2006 |
| Yippiee!!! Another chapter! I love this story (bouncing on bed aside). Please keep writing, you can't leave Haleth in the brigands' camp. Maybe Inglor to the rescue??? Author Reply: Thank you, Kathy I'm glad to know you're enjoying the story. Haleth will eventually get out of the camp. Inglor probably doesn't know she's in trouble. Or maybe he things she is and believes she rescue herself. Or maybe he's trying to prove a point that occasionally she does need help. Somehow, I don't think he'd be foolish enough to try that last option. Thank you again for reviewing. Haleth | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/8/2006 |
| I'll bet Inglor sails in to the rescue. It must be really galling trying to get the better of an elf. Even a gloriously unaware elf like Inglor. And I still don't trust Barny. He'll be in on it somehow! Glad to see more of this! Author Reply: Thank-you, Bodkin It's hard to say what Inglor would do. He'd ride to the rescue if he thought Haleth was in trouble, but he seems to believe that she can look after herself. After all, that's what she keeps telling him. Maybe he does listen to her? Nah. Haleth | |
| perelleth | Reviewed Chapter: 17 on 1/8/2006 |
| I was wondering about this story the other day, and missing Haleth´s disadventures, I'm so glad that you updated! Only, please, do not leave us so long wondering what´s going to happen to her after such ending!!! I wonder what was she thinking about the whole trek that she allowed the elf to give her the slip! Probably counting into impossible amounts to avoid thinking about *other* activities, LOL! I suppose that seeing the chamber maids and waitresses reactions even doubled her *feelings* for the elf! Great. So amusing! Author Reply: Thank-you, perelleth. Poor Haleth. It's too bad she can't be as oblivious as Inglor. It would make her life much easier but far less entertaining. Haleth | |