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| Burden of Guilt by Linda Hoyland | 5 Review(s) |
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| Lady Saruman | Reviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/21/2006 |
| it was oh so enjoyable and i just had to read it again, and i'm leaving another review (do you still remember me????) but this time lets focus on your story. i carried it further and i concluded that Eowyn must be a lot happier now that her bro isn't so much of a jerk and can finally realize and soon come to accept the fact that he really does have a neice, and yes, she IS fathered by Faramir. i mean, she was already happy when she discovered that Elestelle would be able to nurse from her now...and Eomer could also meet Eldarion too. one miscellaneous question: i hope you dont take offense by this, but are you of age to write an R rated story? see, i'm just curious, as most teens are. yes, i'll admit to you that i turned 13 two months ago and am in the 8th grade (probably by sophomore and junior years of high school will give me mountainfuls of homework, and i'll never even sleep), and even though this story is rated R i still read it, because, well, you know how teens are: curious little mischievious creatures. and dont you dare reprimand me for not being old enough to read this or else i shall use my lord's (refer to my title above)staff and bespell you... anyways, i have to read your story again, it just made my day. ^_^ luv, Lady Saruman ^_~ p.s. PLZ ANSWER THIS QUESTION: are you of age to write an R rated story? (meaning 17/over)(plz dont take offense, plz plz plz plz plz...) i've been dying to know this ever since i read this story like, two months ago. best wishes to my new mellon, Linda Hoyland -Lady Saruman, who wishes to tell you that she is an elf... Author Reply: Yes,I turned 18 a very long time ago,so I can both read and write R rated stories !Actually I rated this as PG13 on nother site but gave it a higher rating here as this site is stricter. I am sure Eowyn will be very happy as you will see in a future chapter! | |
| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/20/2006 |
| Phew - thank goodness. The blow to the head, combined with a liberal application of mud has helped Eomer develop a bit more sense. That will be a tremendous relief to Faramir (but they could have sold tickets to the fight to a select audience!) and Aragorn. And probably make Eowyn a good deal happier, too. He could make a point of only saving the really attractive scars though. I'm sure he could spare a few! But I'm glad things seem to be improving. Author Reply: I've had lots of applications for tickets to the fight,how I wish I had some to sell as I'd be rich by now !I'm sure Eomer would look better without his scars,at least his wife would say so ! Many thanks for your much appreciated review. | |
| French Pony | Reviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/20/2006 |
| Things are continuing to look up for Our Heroes. I'm glad that the Éomer situation has been resolved (though I kind of figured that was where it was heading) and Faramir really doesn't seem to have much in the way of emotional blocks toward healing left any more. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.Originally, I was just going to have Eomer jump in the bath and find he could use his arm again,but after all that had happened I figured he needed another knock on the head too ! | |
| Lady Saruman | Reviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/20/2006 |
| great chapter!!!! i'm sorry that i couldnt review 4 the earlier chapters coz skool is keeping meh up till 3 in the morning!!! anyways, i read ur "At the Rising of the Moon" story, it's soooooo funny. one thing i realized was that nobody ever seems 2 believe Aragorn when he claims himself as king. maybe because at the beginning of this story he looks lak a hobo.???? anyways, it seems as if eomer has a minor concussion and forgets his hates towards faramir and aragorn... i wish i had been there, then i could beat up eomer and thrown him in the tub so that mebbe he can take a bath (which i suspect he hasnt done in weeks) and get some sense knocked inta him. well, i guess that ends the fight, although it wouldda been funny to see eomer and aragorn coated in mud while trying to kick each other's butts. *snigger* oh yes, and ive read ur saga bout Aragorn & Faramir. loved it, though wif my deepest regrets ive not been able 2 review until today. -_- (sad face)but, i'm happie 2 say dat i might have more leisure time 2 review, and i forgot 2 add, i nearly cried wif laughter when my imagination went tooooooo far about wrestling kings. EOMER HAS A CONCUSSION, JA? i would luv to find out!!! ^_^ luv, lady saruman ps. do u plan on writing anymore stories???? cuz i love them all!!! -lady saruman ^_~ Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review and welcome to my stories !I'm so pleased that you enjoy them.I certainly hope to keep writing for as long as the Muse supplies me with ideas ! I think Aragorn can easily look like Strider the Ranger again and blend into the background ! Good luck with school ! | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 51 on 1/20/2006 |
| I'm still waiting for the Lord of the Mark to get off his high horse and apologize to Faramir; but at least he's not trying to kill him anymore. And our heroes are coming to a moment of truth - can Aragorn complete Faramir's healing? Only time, and the next chapter, will tell. Hopefully Eomer won't get in the way. Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.You are the only person kind enough to review on both sites.I hope this time round you are getting a better story !I think Eomer's head will take time to clear but it will in time ! | |