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| While the Ring went south... by Thundera Tiger | 2 Review(s) |
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| Grey Wonderer | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/24/2005 |
| Poor Merry! All he wants is a bit of good news and it seems that no one has any. I also feel sorry for Boromir. He seems so cut off from the others by his own worries. This is very entertaining and I am still enjoying Gimli. Author Reply: Glad you still like Gimli! And don't worry too much about Boromir. He'll start making his own connections in his own way pretty soon. It's just going to take him a while to find his place. | |
| Estel_Mi_Olor | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/28/2005 |
| Cheers, Thundera. Just a quick note to point out an error I noticed while re-reading chapter 4 (January 1st ,3019). A little more than halfway down the page, there is a paragraph that begins, "We do not want them to draw too far ahead, but neither do we want to be just behind them,". The following sentence, I believe, is missing the word "wait". "We shall (wait)a quarter of an hour and then follow." Anyways, just a small thing I happened to notice. Keep writing! | |