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| It Was Only a Little White Lie by White Wolf | 11 Review(s) |
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| Sindar90 | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/16/2006 |
| Hi again. It has been long time since i was here, but i see you still write good stories that we can read... I hope nothing serious happens to my dear elf... Then again, it seems so that in your stories something will always happen to him... This is good beginning, so keepo it up, and write more! T: Your finnish-reader... Author Reply: Welcome back. It has definitely been a long time. Thank you, I do try to make my stories very readable. Well I can't remark on what happens to Legolas, however, I've just posted Chapter Two, so you can find out for yourself. | |
| Lady Saruman | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/15/2006 |
| Today is Feb. 14 where I live, not the 15th.... HAPPY VALENTINE'S DAY! Hershey's kisses/hugs -Lady Saruman ^_^ Author Reply: Thank you. That's very nice of you. I hope you are having a happy Valentine's Day. Yum. I love Hershey's kisses. | |
| pipinheart | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/12/2006 |
| This is a nice story, Elrohir telling a white lie seems to have had consequences. Wants revenge on his brother, but Legolas and Aragorn get involved...I am curious what the danger is, or is thier a spider really there, and not a joke at all in the end... Author Reply: Thank you. Even a white lie not meant to hurt has its consequences. In this case, Legolas and Aragorn get themselves involved in Elrohir's lie, and things go dreadfully wrong. The next chapter will reveal what is attacking Legolas. | |
| Delrauko | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 |
| Sounds great! i cant wait for the next chapter! dont leave us hanging!!! :-) Author Reply: Thank you. You won't have to hang too long. I plan on updating next week. | |
| Nayru | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 |
| Wow, whitewolf! This is really awesome how you foreshadow. The part where Aragorn will regret leaving Legolas! I mean it was cool! Author Reply: Thank you. I love foreshadowing. You'll soon see why Aragorn will regret his decision to leave Legolas. | |
| andromida | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 |
| What a great start to a story and how funny but what is in the forest?please update soon thanks Author Reply: Thank you. What's in the forest will be revealed next week in the next chapter. | |
| Noor | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 |
| Excellent beginning! I can't wait for the next chapter. I have read all of your tales and have enjoed them very much. Thank you Noor Author Reply: Thank you. The next chapter will be posted next week. I'm so happy you like my work. I hope to hear from you again. Author Reply: I knew it was you. You signed the review. :o) Author Reply: Sorry the second reply belongs to another review. | |
| Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/10/2006 | |
| awww man! i agree with Galimeril. you've done it again... and again... and again until we readers all die. you killed me with torture! you did that to me in your story "Dragonfire", and now you're doing it AGAIN! i have an idea here. any guys reading this will wet their pants, i think. well, you've done a great job with this story. it's actually scary, like someone telling a white lie and it turns REAL! ahhhhhhh!!!! like the other reviewers, i agree with them, i don't think that thing Legolas has to face is a spider, no matter how much it may seem to be. and Aragorn! he's a really good eavesdropper, probably from his ranger days, especially w/Elladan & Elrohir not hearing him. but if Aragorn had stayed after Elladan had gone, then he could have found out it was a joke and all that. but on the negative side, they wouldn't have gone hunting, and whatever that thing battling Legolas was would probably have gotten Imladris in danger. so in a way that prank was both helpful and harmful at the same time. i see you are updating next week, and "Dragonfire" in a couple of weeks... why does it take that long? mis.: plz visit my website, newly established: www.councilofelrond.com/members/LadySaruman , and if you are a member of that site then you can sign my guestbook. if you aren't a member, you can register @ www.councilofelrond.com . good luck with your next update! Hersheys kisses/hugs -Lady Saruman ^_~ Author Reply: Don't die! I want all my readers whole and healthy. Thank you. I wanted it to seem real. Of course, I can't say yet whether it's a spider or not. Aragorn has had plenty of practice eavesdropping. I think he may have to do a lot of it in self-defense from his brothers playing pranks on him. He and Legolas finally did figure out that the spider story was all a prank on Elrohir's part. Not thinking anything was dangerous, they just wanted to witness the joke on Elladan. Imladris may or may not have been in danger, but other people might have. It usually takes a couple of weeks for me to write a chapter and get it edited to where it is presentable to readers. The next chapter of this story is written and just needs a few touches, which is why it can be posted in a week. I'll visit your website as soon as I get the time, I promise. | |
| sofia | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2006 |
| First off- congrats on this story making 3 place. I do love the twins, and the beginning certainly peeked curiosity. I do wonder what exactly is coming at Legolas. It couldn't be a spider, right? Update soon! Author Reply: Thank you. I also love the twins. I thought, in this case, starting near the end and then going back and working through the rest of the story was the best way to go. Glad it made you curious. Of course, I can't say what's after Legolas, but I hope to update next week, so you won't have to wait too long to find out. | |
| Galimeril | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 2/9/2006 |
| AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! YOU'VE DONE IT AGAIN!!!!!! Not *another* cliffie!!! You are so *EVIL!!!* I love your story, you always make it seem so real! I can't wait for you next update! You should have gotten First Place for this one!!! Author Reply: I try not to be evil, but that was just a good place to end this chapter. Thank you. Saying my stories "seem so real" is a wonderful compliment. I hope to update next week. There are always some great stories for each of the Teitho Contests, so third place is an honor. Glad you thought it should have won. | |