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All Shall Love Me and Despair  by Space Weavil 5 Review(s)
AuroreReviewed Chapter: 4 on 9/8/2006
I do hope you will continue this one day :) It was a great read and I would like to read the rest of it.

Aurore

AuroreReviewed Chapter: 4 on 3/3/2006
You are an excellent writer. I registered just to be able to leave you a review. I have read all 4 chapters, and both your style and storytelling are excellent. The style is similar but still distinct from Tolkiens and you do him no shame, in my opinion :)

I look forwards to part 5 and suggest that you write your own books. You are more than good enough (although the writing is easier than the publishing as I understand things).

Aurore


Aislynn CrowdaughterReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/18/2006
Thrilling story so far. I love it that you do not set Galadriel simply as evil from the moment she takes the ring; this way this AU is much more believable, and very likely. She would start with very good intentions after all. But of course that cannot last; the ring will consume her good side as jealousy and pride once consumed Feanor. I am very curious how you will show us the development! I love tis story and look forward to read more of it!

Aislynn

Susan WReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/14/2006
Yay! Finally an update to this excellent tale.

Hmm! I think I'm with Aragorn on their Elvish guards. They do seem a little fishy. Brr! Great OC in that cold-fish elf, Faelvallas.

sigh! No mentions of Boromir or on how he is faring on his trek back to Gondor. What will he find upon his return home? Will Minas Tirith be over-run by then? I was a little saddened that no one seems concerned about their fellow Walker, Boromir, or that he might not make it through the War. None of the other Walkers have mentioned his being gone. Other than that, I love the characterizations here, they are very well drawn out.

Nice to see Gandalf will be entering the picture. Can't wait to see his reaction to Galadriel and the Ring. I don't think he will like this new situation at all, as he was a staunch supporter of destroying the Ring.

Loved the moments with Legolas and Gimli. Great of Thranduil to accept the dwarf into his palace.

Most anxiously awaiting the next update!

Nienor NinielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 2/13/2006
Oh, great that you updated!

I love the symolism of the Elves trampling leaves into the ground! I guess they are already losing a part of themselves through Galadriel's decisions.

Also the description of what Gandalf experienced after the Balrog fight was great.

So now you have me wondering what will become of the rest-Fellowship and their escort. I smell evil ahead!

All the best, Nienor

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