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| Pride Goes Before a Fall...Or a Farmer's Dogs by Elanor Silmariën | 4 Review(s) |
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| Larner | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/13/2006 |
| Interesting foreshadowing moment there with the fiery eye. Poor Frodo. "You're gonna get caught, just you wait and see!" "Why is everybody always pickin' on me?" Sorry--Charlie Brown crept in there. Author Reply: Poor Frodo indeed. I do believe you are the first one to mention this. The thought popped into my mind, and I thought it rather strange, but after I wrote it I liked it. I hope it isn't too weird..... Thanks for reviewing! God bless, Elanor | |
| Frodo Baggins | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/9/2006 |
| This is great. I know Frodo must have gotten into trouble when he was that age. But what tween doesn't, right? I can't wait to see what happens next! God Bless, Frodo Baggins Author Reply: Thanks, Frodo! Yeah, tweens and trouble do go together! As for what happens next, beware the mushrooms!!!!! Namarie, and God bless, Ellie | |
| Arwen of Lorian | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/8/2006 |
| What a cute hobbit story El! Glad you got another one on here. I wonder if it is the first tale here involving Frodos mushroom-snatching days? Talk later! Smiles and God bless! (lorain)Nammarie,Arwen Author Reply: Glad you liked it, girly! I'm not sure if it is. I haven't read any specifically about this, but there's one where Frodo has flashbacks about this period of his life. I'll have to look that up..... Anyways, talk to you later, Lorain and God bless, Ellie | |
| Queen Galadriel | Reviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/8/2006 |
| Uh-oh, not good. You show Frodo's rascally side very well. :) I quite enjoy your depiction of Saradoc as the softer father-type: "Oh, it's no harm. All lads do it when they're tweens." *grin* Poor Esme! And I like it that the older lads agree to go frog-hunting with Merry and don't shun him. Just one thing, and this is up to you. You might change "okay" for "all right," as in this genre of fanfic modern words will sometimes throw people out of the story. Are you planning on posting the first story in the series here? If not, can you give me the web address? Can't wait to see more of this! God bless, Galadriel Author Reply: Hello! Glad you liked it! Ooops! I have a *bad* habit of writing modern talk, cause I use it in my origional stories. I'll have to change that! Thanks for reminding me! The first one will be posted probably the end of this month, because it's for Marigold's Challenges and you have to wait a certain amount of time before posting it elsewhere. Thanks for reviewing! Elanor | |