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Four Hands Around  by French Pony 5 Review(s)
elliskaReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/13/2006
Sorry to be so late in reviewing (I sound like a broken record, I know). Again I am really struck by what a lovely family scene you have created here. The poor children worrying about their parents. And then them meeting their new brothers. I really though the part with Nerdanel trying to figure out how she didn't know and the explanation Feanor tried to use with her. I love this view of Feanor's family.

perellethReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/12/2006
First, apologies, I've been out of town...

These bunch of very young feanorians kept me laughing! It is refreshing to see them all so young and deeply engaged in those types of endless conversations that easily degenerate into terrible things, as children's tend to. And then, I had a view of Feanor as Leonard of Quirm, here, don't ask me why! :-) Poor Nerdanel! She really needs her rest!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/10/2006
One soul in two bodies would be confusing to the best of folk, I suppose. And it appears Feanaro needs to realized his wife knows of what she speaks.

Agape4GondorReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/9/2006
Hmmmm - very good chapter... but I am already looking towards the creation of the Silmarils.... hmmmm - could the birth of the twins have inspired Feanor?

Thanks for a great chapter!

Agape4Gondor

daw the minstrelReviewed Chapter: 2 on 3/9/2006
I particularly liked the scene where the five older brothers are greeting the twins. It just seemed so cozy and loving.

And I agree with Nerdanel: Seven is definitley enough!!!

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