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| Masquerade by Elendiari22 | 3 Review(s) |
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| Bodkin | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 3/12/2006 |
| I'm with Arwen! You had indeed better tell us! Sooner rather than later. Things seem to be unravelling rather well - I hope there are no hiccups ahead. Aragorn and Arwen could definitely do with getting rid of their predecessors' ghosts before setting up housekeeping in the Royal Apartments. They don't want their offspring running around a la Pippin and Merry, being affected by magic mirrors. Bad as it was, Alatariel had a preferable fate to being placed in the care of that nasty Seregon. Death is one thing - corruption is another, and it sounds as if Seregon was about as corrupt as a Nazgul. Looking forward to discovering more. Author Reply: Something I'm rather embarressed about is the fact that this chapter was ready to go a week ago, and then suddenly I had a score of papers to write for school and I forgot to post it. Luckily, I have an idea what will be happening next and I'm looking forward to writing it soon! Death would be preferable to Seregon, who definitely was as corrupt as a Nazgul. More is coming soon, I hope! | |
| demeter d | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 3/11/2006 |
| Welcome back. isn't it frustrating how "real life" gets in the way if time with our favorite stories? Best of luck to you with your schoolwork, and i hope your health is better. This being a lot of dialogue does not make it any less an exciting chapter that unfolds secrets and moves the story along. I will be anxiously waiting for you to decide what comes next! Author Reply: Real life can be such a bum sometimes. I guess it's just a part of "growing up". I think I know what's going to come next-at least I've got a vague idea-but finding the time to sit down and write it will be a challenge. But it will hopefully be up soon! | |
| Merry_the_Hobbit | Reviewed Chapter: 20 on 3/10/2006 |
| Eeewww! Creepy... shivers all over. Commendable job! Keep it up ;) Author Reply: Thank you! I'll do my best. | |